--Elite Writer Alias: seriouscutter19 Name: Hannah Banana ASL: 17,F,AUS Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 16 Life Story: REVOLuTionary... [ Ignore User ]
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Thnks for the comment, Serious cutter.
it means alot to me.
Ha, this comment was... Hmm Nicer
(i quess is the word im looking for) than so in the past.
Im glad to hear from you.
hey thanks for the comment and sorry to here your friends was shot infront of he/she's store and thanks for the avise and if i get the time i will try to comment your poems i am at school right now and this is the only time i get to get on eliteskills but tanks bye\
Thanks for the wonderful comment you gave me for The Storm. A poet always appreciates when his work is appreciated. I actually wrote that poem while sitting cross legged in the middle of my yard during a massive thunderstorm. The sense of wonder that the dark clouds sparked in me that night the inspiration to write something to try and capture the storm's majesty. I hope I succeeded, and with your commentary, I believe I achieved my goal. Thank you also for the fave, it certainly means a lot. Really.
Maybe something synonymous with tense would be good. I dunno. It just sort of came to me when I realized I was practically eating my jack in the box cup. I'm not really tense, I just chew on things.
Thanks for your comments on my piece of work. I will try and work on it more, you know to make those lines fit and i was also thinking adding more emotion into it. Make it alittle more personal, ya know?
Thanks anywho.