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thank you very much for your comment on 'cold.' the spacing is diliberate. when the poem begins, there is reason to the spacing. every thought is separate, defined. but then lines come chaoticly and the spacing is in the middle of thoughts. its a quick trip through madness before ending with a single, definite thought again. your comment was very helpful.
Thank you for stopping by and reviewing "In Essence." In one respect you were correct about the poem, it is about war: war within oneself and against God.