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    Journal: War is over
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    Mood: Sigh...
      
    Well the war maybe over but to some the real war has just begun ... so much destruction is hard to fix so much sadness is hard to heal :(


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    Featured: Burn My Fair Lady

     In Memory of Robert Jordan
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    ::Lostfriend : Class : Poetry :
     Contradiction
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    ::Dark : Class : Poetry :
     Featured workBurn My Fair Lady
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Blood and Tears (Lebanon's wound)
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    ::Serious : Class : Prose :
     Incomplete
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     Waking to the Sun
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Depression
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    ::Depressed : Class : Deep Thought :
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Suicide
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     Sweet Surrender
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     I miss...
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    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     The Nature of Love
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     Of Love Lost
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     Damnation
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     The Beholder
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     Broken Trust
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     The Candle
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     Men dont cry
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     Aftermath
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    i apperciate the feed back and everything...i changed that poem from what ot originally was...becuse it seems like no matter what i do there is always something wrong with it...so i tried it but thinking about it....then from the heart because either way it's never good according to some people...i understand what you're trying to say and i agree...i went through phases and this was a heavy rhyming phase...i do more freeverse now...but i thank you for what you said and you're right...just wanted to share poems
    | Posted on 2007-09-10 18:20:30 | by taintedsmiles - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanx for your comment on letters to a lady. thats prolly the write i like most out of everything ive ever written even though it doesnt manage to say what i want it to.
    and yes, you are right, it is interesting to see other peoples responses to the piece... everyone comes to poetry with their own frame of reference and it is interesting the way they apply it...
    thanx for taking the time to check my piece out
    | Posted on 2007-07-06 06:17:05 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -



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