I don't think it was that long a piece. I mean there is always an edit and a re-edit. But then I am very minimal in my writes. I try to get it down to as small as possible.
As to justice... yeah.
I know my uncle had a hard time of it, but he was also born in a different time and I am sure was treated very differently. Unfortunately, he was one of the ones that got bad clotting factor in the 80's and later died from HIV complications. Though, in his mind (which was brilliant most days) I am sure he was a daredevil everyday that he got up.
thanks so very much for the comment on my haikus
i really appreciate it. well, as for the student thing, i am sort of forced to be dedicated so i can get into college. i cant afford to go without a really good scholarship and i want to be able to do well.
thanks again
Hey, thanks for the comment on "Leftover Love"! You interpereted it perfectly (yay!). As for wanting it longer, I guess, to each his own. I personally prefer small poems with a big punch.
I'm just a little confused by your comment on "You act like it's okay to cry" ( which I do appreciate muchly) You say you see a clash of moral standings? And I get the feeling you don't agree with what I'm saying.
This discombobulates me, because all I'm talking about, is how people act when they are in a break down, when lifes not exactly going right. A lot of my friends are very uptight and tend to go all stoic and not tell anyone. And then some of them are ridiculously open with it, and everyone knows when they are having it tough. And I'm just voicing the question with this write, What is the correct way to have a "breakdown"? Because we all have them now and then.
But anyway, I do appreciate the comment, and if you wouldn't mind expandind on your thoughts, that would be cool.
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