--Elite Writer Alias: Silver20G Name: Phillip Yates ASL: 26/M/Wisconsin Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 1 Life Story: Summarize. [ Ignore User ]
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i have read a few of your postings- i would have to say that i am most certainly intrigued by your writings- some i have to reread to get the full effect- however others reach right in and twist my heart with each line.
i will come back to read more of yours that is for certain..
Thanks for your comment on "Mockery" :)
That is a very good point, I should have been consistent in using puncuation if I was going to use it at all :)
Ill go through and fix it when I get the chance and ill try to comment on somthing of yours :)
Thanks again.
-Safire
thanks for your comment....you nailed it....most ppl just dont understand and look down on this...its diff. for everyone but its all part of the grand scheme....
ok but thats the thing in my poem My Love's Demise i really don't know where to take it and to answer ur questions she walked out on mi...but i will try to add more to it to make u understand