It’s somewhat nice to hear that you didn’t mispell aything on your write and I’m glad that that was the case, as you put it forwards. I’m neither ruffled nor bent out of shape about your remarks. I’m only slightly puzzled about being patronized. I’ve never been able to fathom the unwavering desideratum for believing one’s better than the other. It would take a lifetime for it to sink in.
I rarely, and I truly state, rarely spend time any time replying to such observations probably on account of the fact that I seldom light upon them within Elite skills. You are right when you say that it’s not correct to expect to sparkle the same feeling you had on your reader but it is equally wrong to expect someone to be cognizant of what you intended when some pieces are exceedingly personal. I do not expect readers to get a handle on what I write and I don’t pose as an accomplished writer, were I to be one I would keep the same attitude.
I apology for not having been able to elaborate on you piece a little further and for not having being inspired enough to keep writing. I did forget to include the fact that everything I say on Elite skills is humbly displayed. I guess I did fail on that account too.
Finally, “I’m tired” has never been past. It always been present, as in simple present, and “I tire” which I must admit didn’t know at the time that could work as a verb is also simple present. I believe the first is an attribute or a mood about a present situation and the latter a repeated action in the same tense. They do differ in meaning, as you brought up though.
Bah! I meant "pursed" dammit!!! Man that was a mind bender, no not "perused" , "pursed" as in pursed lips... Ok now maybe it will read better haha, hey man don't be so hard I am sure you have friends somewhere, hell most of mine are asylum material but that's how I like them ;) you seem like an ok character in my world albeit missunderstood, but then again aren't we all?