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13.61 Years 1.36 Quote:
After all, He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named did great things. Terrible! Yes. But great.
my goddess by Egan
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158days is a long friggin time to be away for...
|| Posted on 2011-06-10 13:12:31 | by Jacoby - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thanks for your comment on my latest untitled piece.
That one line in the second part of the poem was written in Esperanto. I thought that was somewhat evident, as I had just said 'Esperanto lessons' in the previous line. :/
Also, I used 'palate' in a context where I believe it is common. Personally, I find it to be an exquisite word, and I love to use it. And, if it had a jarring effect, then that is good too. The whole piece feels rather jarring to me, so it fits.
|| Posted on 2010-12-26 14:29:57 | by AsiaticFox - [ Reply to This ] -|
also, re the poetry pro fessor
can he say he's being stalked by 4 whole people? lol
|| Posted on 2010-02-01 18:32:41 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -|
This is me doing a sonnet.
I'd rise to leave her sleeping years ago
when she imparted poetry to me
and torn between her form and artistry
I'd pen for hours the love we came to know.
She gave me ballads with the gentle flow
of days when laughter wove our memories.
I thought to craft her eyes and mystery
in sonnets even time could not unsew.
How apt that since her death I cannot write
but leaf through grief and trace her grace in books
of poems that we lived when we were one.
A fool to leave her side those many nights;
the words just glimpses of the light she took.
She held the blinding beauty of the sun.
|| Posted on 2010-02-01 17:32:17 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thank you for the birthday huzzah, Kirst. <3
|| Posted on 2010-01-25 18:34:57 | by Tisuna - [ Reply to This ] -|
Actually...oh, I won't say it.
But yes, I am no longer under a self-imposed deadline. The relief is nice.
And if you've read Good Omens, we need to talk about it.
|| Posted on 2010-01-16 18:51:01 | by Tisuna - [ Reply to This ] -|