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    Journal: Book
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    Mood: Bored
      
    I wrote a book. I'm not sure if I should post it.


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     The Best of Me
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     December
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     Thing
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    I know what you mean!!! And I feel the exact same way - I'm SO glad to be back at school, now. Being athome without a car... augh.
    | Posted on 2007-01-16 18:05:34 | by Cora Windover - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    First off thanks for the comments. Immaculate was used in a sarcastic sense, saying oh it was so perfect. As for the knife in "Dancing With Fire", it's showing an act of suicide after giving up. And thanks for the thoughts on Justice.
    | Posted on 2007-01-15 08:06:10 | by djtswing - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I had a wonderful Christmas, and New Year's, thanks!! How about you?
    | Posted on 2007-01-11 18:54:29 | by Cora Windover - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for all the comments. Yes, the overly used word, it. I have to change it to anything, messed up. But thanks again for all the comments, and I'll look into the play.
    | Posted on 2007-01-08 00:00:00 | by djtswing - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    ack. What's with me not being like "oh, you?" ppbbbtt.

    So Jen, then? I still have some of your old stuff saved on my computer...
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank for your comment on Undone - about "overcome"... besides the fact that it just plain sounds better... "overcome" as opposed to "overcame" refers to something that is happening - in the present as opposed to the past, which is the impression I wanted to give. And just "to" as opposed to "into" sounds much worse o.o;;; with the two syllables, it puts more stress on the 'to' half of "into" and makes the rhyme clearer... it also references a song lyric ^-^;; Yes, there are no typos... everything is meticulously planned. Anyway, thanks so much for the comment!!! <3 ~Cora
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover - [ Reply to This ] -



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