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    Post Parting by AlyRose
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    Featured: Confession of a Bleeding Memory

     Leaving Darker Shadows
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Unkempt Promises
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Our lives depicted
    :|| V: 557 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     A Contravened Instant
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     :.Domestic Accusations.:
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     The Evil in Me
    :|| V: 495 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Sorry : Class : Poetry :
     Moment(s)
    :|| V: 512 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     ..Love is deceit..
    :|| V: 752 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Angry : Class : Poetry :
     Daddy's Karma
    :|| V: 709 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Angry : Class : Poetry :
     How to quit this Love
    :|| V: 686 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     Line of Rejection
    :|| V: 894 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     :.This Poem is Your Letter.:
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     I Never Wanted
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Through the Window
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     Accidental Pasts
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     A dozen sins on fire
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     Sidewalk
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     Read me a Fairytale
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     The End of an Aching Story
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     Featured workConfession of a Bleeding Memory
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    did i thank you for the wonderful comment? i can't remember, so i'm going to now. if i already did, just ignore this. haha
    that was one of the best comments i have received in a long time. your kind words made my evening. i'm so glad you liked it, especially enough to add it as a favorite. that means a lot and i appreciate it.

    thanks again!

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2009-11-01 23:46:29 | by Razor2TheRosary - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank for the favorites addition.
    | Posted on 2009-09-17 08:57:45 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey there Still,

    Thanks 4 getting back re "Unkempt Promises".

    I really did like the piece. Don't pay too much attention to my nit-picking, I can't even hold down a job!

    Cheers,
    Alex

    | Posted on 2009-08-07 10:29:38 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello there!

    Thank you very much 4 your comments on "Ring".

    I'm quite surprised at the reviews it's received, as I thought it might be missing something.

    Something I was a bit concerned about, re Suessesque rhyme, was "Crash/Gash". I'm still not sure about those lines...and was "eyes are wild" maybe a cliché...?

    Anyway, cheers 4 the feedback. It is frustrating when u don't get enough.

    Oh, and I noticed you also included "Dial Tone" amongst your favs (I did too!)

    :) Alex
    | Posted on 2009-08-03 12:27:40 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey,

    Thanks so much for your kind words! I totally get what you're trying to say and I changed it to keep it consistent. It never occured to me that it changed from direct to indirect so thanks for noticing that.

    That's a good stanza and one of my fav ones that I wrote as well as a common fav of others. I definitely loved your description as to why you loved it. I tried as best as I could to give off those emotions and I'm glad that it came across as well as it did.

    I look forward to reading your future stuff, esp anything that is inspired by what I wrote.

    Thanks for the comment and hope to hear more from you soon

    -J
    | Posted on 2009-07-31 16:38:23 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    lol I'm back now. been super busy with work but I'll make a better effot to check it more often. I'm working on some new stuff as well but that of course takes time to write out the way I want it to. but in the meantime, comment away!
    | Posted on 2009-06-17 11:28:33 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -



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