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StillimCold

Name: ... Robyn ...
ASL: 28/F/California
Website:[ Education ]
Blog: [ Blog ]
Days Away: 1815
Life Story: once adult.now child
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Favorites: 28
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Signup Date: 6838 D
18.73 Years 1.87 Quote:
Do not fear to be eccentric in opinion, for every opinion now accepted was once eccentric. -Bertrand Russell

Recent Favorites:

Post Parting by AlyRose

Butterflies by Razor2TheRosary

The Twilight Stretched by Silenced Hope

I am not Shakespeare by nevender

Dial Tone by awastedsky
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Confession of a Bleeding Memory
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Currently Stalking: Me Rambling, blueorchids, Razor2TheRosary

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Featured: Confession of a Bleeding Memory

Leaving Darker Shadows
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

Unkempt Promises
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Our lives depicted
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

A Contravened Instant
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::Serious : Class : Poetry :

:.Domestic Accusations.:
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::Serious : Class : Poetry :

The Evil in Me
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::Sorry : Class : Poetry :

Moment(s)
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

..Love is deceit..
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::Angry : Class : Poetry :

Daddy's Karma
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::Angry : Class : Poetry :

How to quit this Love
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::Love : Class : Poetry :

Line of Rejection
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

:.This Poem is Your Letter.:
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I Never Wanted
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Through the Window
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Accidental Pasts
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

A dozen sins on fire
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::Passion : Class : Poetry :

Sidewalk
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

Read me a Fairytale
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The End of an Aching Story
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Confession of a Bleeding Memory
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did i thank you for the wonderful comment? i can't remember, so i'm going to now. if i already did, just ignore this. haha
that was one of the best comments i have received in a long time. your kind words made my evening. i'm so glad you liked it, especially enough to add it as a favorite. that means a lot and i appreciate it.

thanks again!

-nikkki

| Posted on 2009-11-01 23:46:29 | by Razor2TheRosary - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank for the favorites addition.

| Posted on 2009-09-17 08:57:45 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey there Still,

Thanks 4 getting back re "Unkempt Promises".

I really did like the piece. Don't pay too much attention to my nit-picking, I can't even hold down a job!

Cheers,
Alex

| Posted on 2009-08-07 10:29:38 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -

Hello there!

Thank you very much 4 your comments on "Ring".

I'm quite surprised at the reviews it's received, as I thought it might be missing something.

Something I was a bit concerned about, re Suessesque rhyme, was "Crash/Gash". I'm still not sure about those lines...and was "eyes are wild" maybe a cliché...?

Anyway, cheers 4 the feedback. It is frustrating when u don't get enough.

Oh, and I noticed you also included "Dial Tone" amongst your favs (I did too!)

:) Alex

| Posted on 2009-08-03 12:27:40 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey,

Thanks so much for your kind words! I totally get what you're trying to say and I changed it to keep it consistent. It never occured to me that it changed from direct to indirect so thanks for noticing that.

That's a good stanza and one of my fav ones that I wrote as well as a common fav of others. I definitely loved your description as to why you loved it. I tried as best as I could to give off those emotions and I'm glad that it came across as well as it did.

I look forward to reading your future stuff, esp anything that is inspired by what I wrote.

Thanks for the comment and hope to hear more from you soon

-J

| Posted on 2009-07-31 16:38:23 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -

lol I'm back now. been super busy with work but I'll make a better effot to check it more often. I'm working on some new stuff as well but that of course takes time to write out the way I want it to. but in the meantime, comment away!

| Posted on 2009-06-17 11:28:33 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -

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