Name: ... Robyn ...
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18.42 Years 1.84 Quote:
Do not fear to be eccentric in opinion, for every opinion now accepted was once eccentric. -Bertrand Russell
Post Parting by AlyRose
Butterflies by Razor2TheRosary
The Twilight Stretched by Silenced Hope
I am not Shakespeare by nevender
Dial Tone by awastedsky
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did i thank you for the wonderful comment? i can't remember, so i'm going to now. if i already did, just ignore this. haha
that was one of the best comments i have received in a long time. your kind words made my evening. i'm so glad you liked it, especially enough to add it as a favorite. that means a lot and i appreciate it.
|| Posted on 2009-11-01 23:46:29 | by Razor2TheRosary - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thank for the favorites addition.
|| Posted on 2009-09-17 08:57:45 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -|
Hey there Still,
Thanks 4 getting back re "Unkempt Promises".
I really did like the piece. Don't pay too much attention to my nit-picking, I can't even hold down a job!
|| Posted on 2009-08-07 10:29:38 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thank you very much 4 your comments on "Ring".
I'm quite surprised at the reviews it's received, as I thought it might be missing something.
Something I was a bit concerned about, re Suessesque rhyme, was "Crash/Gash". I'm still not sure about those lines...and was "eyes are wild" maybe a cliché...?
Anyway, cheers 4 the feedback. It is frustrating when u don't get enough.
Oh, and I noticed you also included "Dial Tone" amongst your favs (I did too!)
|| Posted on 2009-08-03 12:27:40 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thanks so much for your kind words! I totally get what you're trying to say and I changed it to keep it consistent. It never occured to me that it changed from direct to indirect so thanks for noticing that.
That's a good stanza and one of my fav ones that I wrote as well as a common fav of others. I definitely loved your description as to why you loved it. I tried as best as I could to give off those emotions and I'm glad that it came across as well as it did.
I look forward to reading your future stuff, esp anything that is inspired by what I wrote.
Thanks for the comment and hope to hear more from you soon
|| Posted on 2009-07-31 16:38:23 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -|
lol I'm back now. been super busy with work but I'll make a better effot to check it more often. I'm working on some new stuff as well but that of course takes time to write out the way I want it to. but in the meantime, comment away!
|| Posted on 2009-06-17 11:28:33 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -|