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StillimCold


Name: ... Robyn ...
ASL: 28/F/California
Website:[ Education ]
Blog: [ Blog ]
Days Away: 1702
Life Story: once adult.now child
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Favorites: 28
Forum Posts: 1
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Signup Date: 6725 D
18.42 Years 1.84 Quote:
Do not fear to be eccentric in opinion, for every opinion now accepted was once eccentric. -Bertrand Russell


Recent Favorites:
Post Parting by AlyRose
Butterflies by Razor2TheRosary
The Twilight Stretched by Silenced Hope
I am not Shakespeare by nevender
Dial Tone by awastedsky
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Confession of a Bleeding Memory
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Featured: Confession of a Bleeding Memory

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 Our lives depicted
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 A Contravened Instant
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 :.Domestic Accusations.:
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 The Evil in Me
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 ..Love is deceit..
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 Daddy's Karma
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 How to quit this Love
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 Line of Rejection
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 :.This Poem is Your Letter.:
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 I Never Wanted
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 Through the Window
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 Accidental Pasts
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 A dozen sins on fire
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 Sidewalk
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 Read me a Fairytale
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did i thank you for the wonderful comment? i can't remember, so i'm going to now. if i already did, just ignore this. haha
that was one of the best comments i have received in a long time. your kind words made my evening. i'm so glad you liked it, especially enough to add it as a favorite. that means a lot and i appreciate it.

thanks again!

-nikkki
| Posted on 2009-11-01 23:46:29 | by Razor2TheRosary - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thank for the favorites addition.
| Posted on 2009-09-17 08:57:45 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hey there Still,

Thanks 4 getting back re "Unkempt Promises".

I really did like the piece. Don't pay too much attention to my nit-picking, I can't even hold down a job!

Cheers,
Alex

| Posted on 2009-08-07 10:29:38 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hello there!

Thank you very much 4 your comments on "Ring".

I'm quite surprised at the reviews it's received, as I thought it might be missing something.

Something I was a bit concerned about, re Suessesque rhyme, was "Crash/Gash". I'm still not sure about those lines...and was "eyes are wild" maybe a cliché...?

Anyway, cheers 4 the feedback. It is frustrating when u don't get enough.

Oh, and I noticed you also included "Dial Tone" amongst your favs (I did too!)

:) Alex
| Posted on 2009-08-03 12:27:40 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hey,

Thanks so much for your kind words! I totally get what you're trying to say and I changed it to keep it consistent. It never occured to me that it changed from direct to indirect so thanks for noticing that.

That's a good stanza and one of my fav ones that I wrote as well as a common fav of others. I definitely loved your description as to why you loved it. I tried as best as I could to give off those emotions and I'm glad that it came across as well as it did.

I look forward to reading your future stuff, esp anything that is inspired by what I wrote.

Thanks for the comment and hope to hear more from you soon

-J
| Posted on 2009-07-31 16:38:23 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -
  
lol I'm back now. been super busy with work but I'll make a better effot to check it more often. I'm working on some new stuff as well but that of course takes time to write out the way I want it to. but in the meantime, comment away!
| Posted on 2009-06-17 11:28:33 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -



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