did i thank you for the wonderful comment? i can't remember, so i'm going to now. if i already did, just ignore this. haha that was one of the best comments i have received in a long time. your kind words made my evening. i'm so glad you liked it, especially enough to add it as a favorite. that means a lot and i appreciate it. thanks again! -nikkki

| Posted on 2009-11-01 23:46:29 | by Razor2TheRosary - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank for the favorites addition.

| Posted on 2009-09-17 08:57:45 | by Silenced Hope - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey there Still, Thanks 4 getting back re "Unkempt Promises". I really did like the piece. Don't pay too much attention to my nit-picking, I can't even hold down a job! Cheers, Alex

| Posted on 2009-08-07 10:29:38 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -

Hello there! Thank you very much 4 your comments on "Ring". I'm quite surprised at the reviews it's received, as I thought it might be missing something. Something I was a bit concerned about, re Suessesque rhyme, was "Crash/Gash". I'm still not sure about those lines...and was "eyes are wild" maybe a cliché...? Anyway, cheers 4 the feedback. It is frustrating when u don't get enough. Oh, and I noticed you also included "Dial Tone" amongst your favs (I did too!) :) Alex

| Posted on 2009-08-03 12:27:40 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey, Thanks so much for your kind words! I totally get what you're trying to say and I changed it to keep it consistent. It never occured to me that it changed from direct to indirect so thanks for noticing that. That's a good stanza and one of my fav ones that I wrote as well as a common fav of others. I definitely loved your description as to why you loved it. I tried as best as I could to give off those emotions and I'm glad that it came across as well as it did. I look forward to reading your future stuff, esp anything that is inspired by what I wrote. Thanks for the comment and hope to hear more from you soon -J

| Posted on 2009-07-31 16:38:23 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -

lol I'm back now. been super busy with work but I'll make a better effot to check it more often. I'm working on some new stuff as well but that of course takes time to write out the way I want it to. but in the meantime, comment away!

| Posted on 2009-06-17 11:28:33 | by jaramae - [ Reply to This ] -

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