--Elite Writer Alias: Strator Name: Shawn William ASL: 22/M/US Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 3276 Life Story: Always Changing [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: New Meaning -------------------------------------------
Mood: In Love
I have new hope and meaning in my life. I found or reconnected with God, and I am now attending church. I have a new job....a steady income. Plus the best part...I was given the best gift God could give me. Her name is Jessi..and she is the love of my life. Things have happened quickly....but it doesn't matter.
Finish school in February of 2010. Once I do, I am proposing to Jess and starting my new life officially.
Hey Shawn. Haven't talked to you in forever. How are things going? I do realize that you've been gone for nine days, but I thought I'd leave you a mesage anyways.
I'm doing okay. I like your picture. When reading others poetry, I picture people completeley different form what they actually look like. With you, that's not how it is. Without looking at your pic, I pictured you almost exactly as you are.
I recently put up a pciture of myself, finally. Actually, I had one up there before but you couldn't really see it that well. However, the pic I have now it good, I think. So if and when you get back, check it out. See if it's what you pictured me to look like.
I am aware that you've had that pic up for some time, I'm just not that very observant, so I never really looked at it before. I once commented on a poem and I had no idea what it meant. Turns out there was a picture above it and it was describing the picture. Just me being stupid.
Okay, I better go before I type up a whole page for you. You probably won't be back for some time, which means this comment is basically a waste of time. But I'm very, very bored.
Thank for the comment on "Beauty of the Monster". I appreciate constructive criticism, so thank you.
I was influenced to write this by reading the book Frankenstein. It's not really about the monster in Frankenstein. The thing in my poem is just similar to the monster in Frankenstein.
Your comments on my "Rain" are nice to hear. This is one area that most of us experience and the noises and the appearance and the actual happening of rain we can most easily relate to. Perhaps I would not have been so mild about this phenomenon of nature was I experiencing a monsoon but we are where we live! As to rhyming, I am, generally speaking, not too enamoured of the didadidadida school of versifying. I think that it detracts from more serious poetry but, on the other hand, it can enliven comic verse. I guess we can all benefit from editing but, as with most of my pieces I spend a lot of time honing the fabric of the work to get it to a point that satisfies me and it is at that point that I quit giving it the "once more over". Thanks once again for your valuedb comments which are much appreciated
Aww thanks for the comment:) Sry i haven't really been commenting on any of your stuff, but im going through a little block right now, but once im through it, i'll be right back to commenting:)
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