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    Mood: horribly embarrassed for my younger self
      
    Looking through my biography on here, I was quite a rude little devil a few years back. Unfortunately, the ability to alter my bio on this website is... well, nil. My apologies if I have ever offended anybody on this website in the past. I am nearing the end of my college years at this point. I have grown an incredible amount as a person these past few years, and my bio doesn't reflect who I am today... at all.


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    Oh, i know what you were trying to do with your poem :), and i found it really amusing. I just want that feeling of "Oh wow, ive been tricked" to be stronger, the kind where you like smack your head against the wall or something ;).
    | Posted on 2008-03-25 13:28:09 | by Passionbyapathy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I want to thank you for commenting my poem "Inequality of Life", especially since you grasped the poem PERFECTLY, which is amazingly rare. I honestly have never had anyone understand the true meaning behind the first 3 lines, and you hit on it perfectly, kudos, and thank you.
    | Posted on 2008-03-25 13:26:08 | by Passionbyapathy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I can and do take constructive critism. I often use some of the suggestions that are given to me. But to have someone tell me how I should write just doesn't float with me. Especially if they only read the first part. I, and others, happen to very much like the way I wrote that story. If I came off as being rude, I apologize. I didn't intend it. But if YOU can't be adult about what I said, why should I take you seriously?
    | Posted on 2008-03-16 12:31:42 | by MinervaBlu - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on 'An Extra-Special Poem' - but it was written for a certain someone, and it sounded exactly the way I meant it to.

    And yes, 'awkward un-eloquent crappy romance poem' is exactly the way I wanted it to sound.
    | Posted on 2008-03-16 07:13:23 | by Cora Windover - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment and the 'suggestions', but everyone has their own writing style, that happened to have been mine. I'm aware that I had many spellign errors, I explained that in the description. It was late and I just write it posted it on here from my notebook. If you had read further, you would have figured out why the son was amde to be stable and alot more. I never thought of saying he was the son was made to be the stable boy because he father was evil. That's not how it went down. Thank you for your critism, but of you don't like it. Don't read it. I haven't time to read a lenghy comment on how I should have wrote MY story.
    | Posted on 2008-03-16 00:59:14 | by MinervaBlu - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I appreciate that but remember, most people want to read the finished product not something that just came into your head on the spur of the moment.
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    | Posted on 2007-09-29 09:51:54 | by Asakura Cowboy - [ Reply to This ] -



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