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Thankyou I will work on that some time today when I get a chance. I want to fix it and edit some and stuff. thanks totojane

| Posted on 2009-08-22 12:23:33 | by totojane03 - [ Reply to This ] -

thanks for commenting the whole thing was though i wrote it just for him. he understands what im trying to say. my frist stanza was about when me and him frist kissed. he was 17 and i was 14. a huge age difference and he was a total bad boy. not a good combination. my second stanza was about when me and him frist said "i love you" to eachother. both of us have been hurt in past relationships and we were both trying to avoid that happening again. i agree on your comments though. you would have to know our background to understand the poem. so thanks for the comments. rachel:)

| Posted on 2009-08-21 13:08:25 | by PopRocksRae - [ Reply to This ] -

Yes thankyou I was told once before that same thing but kinda questioned my own thought and wanted to get some better feedback and that is why I am on here lol. I really am not sure what that format is but would love to fix it so it is alot more easyer to read. It is kinda like a draft with alot of rammbling thoughts that I wrote down trying to put them in order. I will try to fix the format thanks totojane

| Posted on 2009-08-21 12:18:06 | by totojane03 - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the comment ^-^! Just a bad night.

| Posted on 2008-07-01 09:05:17 | by dismal_s child - [ Reply to This ] -

HEYY!!!! IM IN mEXICO RIGHT NOW ON SOME LAPTOP THAT I GET 15 MINUTES ON LOL i cant wait to come home xoxxo mimss you!!!

| Posted on 2008-04-07 14:59:50 | by YvonneJoyce - [ Reply to This ] -

Thnk you for that i took your addvice. Please tell me what you think now. Cokesu

| Posted on 2008-01-02 19:33:43 | by Cokesu - [ Reply to This ] -

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