--Elite Writer Alias: Suicidalchild51 Name: Amber Blamber ASL: 17/f/wa Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 3702 Life Story: Hasn't Been Written [ Ignore User ]
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the whole thing was though i wrote it just for him. he understands what im trying to say.
my frist stanza was about when me and him frist kissed. he was 17 and i was 14. a huge age difference and he was a total bad boy. not a good combination.
my second stanza was about when me and him frist said "i love you" to eachother.
both of us have been hurt in past relationships and we were both trying to avoid that happening again.
i agree on your comments though. you would have to know our background to understand the poem. so thanks for the comments.
rachel:)
Yes thankyou I was told once before that same thing but kinda questioned my own thought and wanted to get some better feedback and that is why I am on here lol.
I really am not sure what that format is but would love to fix it so it is alot more easyer to read. It is kinda like a draft with alot of rammbling thoughts that I wrote down trying to put them in order. I will try to fix the format
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