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thanks for the comment on "your sweet nothings stained my carpet" the stain is both real and a metaphor. it was a stain in my aunts house and it just clicked
| Posted on 2007-08-29 13:46:40 | by Alyra - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Angry? I consider many things poetry... Moreso than I like to admit. Audacious I will give you aswell, sometimes I assert myself much. But if you aren't willing to take criticism, be it from a person who could use his own, or put more harshly than not... Why take any at all really? It's such an annoyance to see the redundant crap that can come on this website... I saw something in your piece that made it wort commenting on. If you can handle a bit of hate, much less hypocrisy... Why are you living in any society?

Note, commas are always debatable. Nebulosity isn't a word though it should be... Ginormous wasn't a word until recently, a few months ago they added it to some international english dictionary... Didn't stop me from using it. And as for the Orgueille... It's french..

I'll retract my comment if you really took offense, I didn't think the initial purpose of this website would be forgotten so easily.
| Posted on 2007-08-26 17:52:56 | by OrigamiLover - [ Reply to This ] -



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