--Elite Writer Alias: SuperbNova Name: You Wish ASL: 17/f/your mom Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 4584 Life Story: I rock [ Ignore User ]
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thank you for commenting on my piece ``Strolling Through My Body and Mind Part 3``. The concept behind this piece was to give a glimpse to my fellow friends and artists what goes in my head when I write poetry.
What I meant by cliché (pardon the lack of accent, too lazy) is that the rhymes seem expected, such as rhyming "you" with "to" (I'm not sure if you used this rhyme, I'm just giving examples. I hope you didn't take offense at my comment, I only want to help, not hinder.