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    Journal: Where am I?
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: The Usual
      
    Where I am

    (Broken laughter)
    There has not been a day that as passed
    Where my laughter did not fall short;
    As always I am weighed down
    By the thought of you,
    Still, I am not your beloved
    Your dark eyes are somewhere else today.

    (Soft whisper)
    What happens when the ghosts under your bed start breathing?
    When life stops waiting for you?
    (louder)
    You know Ill still be here

    (a woman moans)
    There has not been a touch
    That did not leave a mark;
    As always you leave a scar,
    Still, I wear the wounds like badges
    Pleasure is such sweet pain.

    (Soft whisper)
    What happens when you stash me away with the skeletons stacked in your closet?
    When you find whatever it is you cannot with me?
    (louder)
    Where will I be then?

    (Footsteps and muffled voices)
    There is not one hallway
    That does not speak your name;
    As always each step I take is an echo of you,
    Still you are not thinking of me
    You mind is clouded with more important things

    (soft whisper)
    What happens when you catch a glimpse of blood or tears?
    When you learn, that I too can feel
    (louder)
    Are you still so sure I will be here?
    (crying)


    ...Created 2006-09-17 17:01:00     [ View Past Journals ]

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     Curiosity Kills Heroes
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     The Window to Your Soul
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     The Dirty Skyscraper
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     Freedom Poem
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    HEY SWANNE

    thinking about you hoping you're okay
    I have desided to stop putting my brothers poems up here I need to let go
    But I will be putting more of my own up soon


    Stormkrow
    | Posted on 2007-09-12 13:55:36 | by stormkrow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    | Posted on 2007-07-11 10:17:43 | by rws - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You were here nine days ago?
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:48:24 | by D McDaniel - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Swanne,

    Of course you can send it to anyone you wish and thank you for the Fave!

    I added the diamond part after I thought about the idea of a girl smashing her hand into a mirror last month, but the 'girl' in this poem has only been offered the diamond. She does not get married, but decides there is more to her life than being some guy's posession.

    I thought of your vampire art when I 'saw' the blood running down her arm in my mind. But I also see you as a young lady with a lot to do with her life before she ever gets married. It seems that you are that kind of a girl from what you said about yourself.

    My Daughter just turned thirty however and I wish she had not waited this long. She does have a new boyfriend however.

    I just read annie888's 'Tiny Writers Club' the other day and I am ready for some grandchildren... some Tiny Writers!

    Donn
    | Posted on 2006-09-28 00:00:00 | by D McDaniel - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Yeah. Been a long week, though. Can't wait for the weekend.
    | Posted on 2006-09-28 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Glad to see you here, I worry about you. But those two are not new. So let me know what you think of Kaleidoscope.

    Donn
    | Posted on 2006-09-27 00:00:00 | by D McDaniel - [ Reply to This ] -



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