--Elite Writer Alias: Swanne Name: Swanne .. ASL: Female, 21,Canada Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 4545 Life Story: built to Fail [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: Where am I? -------------------------------------------
Mood: The Usual
Where I am
(Broken laughter)
There has not been a day that as passed
Where my laughter did not fall short;
As always I am weighed down
By the thought of you,
Still, I am not your beloved
Your dark eyes are somewhere else today.
(Soft whisper)
What happens when the ghosts under your bed start breathing?
When life stops waiting for you?
(louder)
You know I’ll still be here
(a woman moans)
There has not been a touch
That did not leave a mark;
As always you leave a scar,
Still, I wear the wounds like badges
Pleasure is such sweet pain.
(Soft whisper)
What happens when you stash me away with the skeletons stacked in your closet?
When you find whatever it is you cannot with me?
(louder)
Where will I be then?
(Footsteps and muffled voices)
There is not one hallway
That does not speak your name;
As always each step I take is an echo of you,
Still you are not thinking of me
You mind is clouded with more important things
(soft whisper)
What happens when you catch a glimpse of blood or tears?
When you learn, that I too can feel
(louder)
Are you still so sure I will be here?
(crying)
thinking about you hoping you're okay
I have desided to stop putting my brothers poems up here I need to let go
But I will be putting more of my own up soon
Of course you can send it to anyone you wish and thank you for the Fave!
I added the diamond part after I thought about the idea of a girl smashing her hand into a mirror last month, but the 'girl' in this poem has only been offered the diamond. She does not get married, but decides there is more to her life than being some guy's posession.
I thought of your vampire art when I 'saw' the blood running down her arm in my mind. But I also see you as a young lady with a lot to do with her life before she ever gets married. It seems that you are that kind of a girl from what you said about yourself.
My Daughter just turned thirty however and I wish she had not waited this long. She does have a new boyfriend however.
I just read annie888's 'Tiny Writers Club' the other day and I am ready for some grandchildren... some Tiny Writers!
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