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    Mood: The Usual
      
    One song can spark a moment,
    One flower can wake the dream.
    One tree can start a forest,
    One bird can herald spring.

    One smile begins a friendship,
    One handclasp lifts a soul.
    One star can guide a ship at sea,
    One word can frame the goal.

    One vote can change a nation,
    One sunbeam lights a room
    One candle wipes out darkness,
    One laugh will conquer gloom.

    One step must start each journey.
    One word must start each prayer.
    One hope will raise our spirits,
    One touch can show you care

    One voice can speak with wisdom,
    One heart can know what's true,
    One life can make a difference,
    You see, it's up to you!

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    hey, read my newest pieces! I feel like no one ever reads my stuff, I need more comments! lol

    Miss you :)
    Flora
    | Posted on 2010-06-27 21:21:16 | by blankscreen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Boo.
    | Posted on 2010-06-20 22:26:24 | by blankscreen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    No disappointment. To be honest, I kind of find it lame to hear that my poetry/prose inspires people. To me that's a real cop out to thinking, because it unloads itself on the emotional aspect of things.. and very scarcely do such inspirational pushes actually prompt inspired work.

    But, you know, I have to use the commonplace lingo, or else I get called an Úlitist by the fowl.

    And forgive Hume, as not many people really know his philosophy at all - even when it comes to philosophers. He's something of a difficult english man: difficult to explain, difficult to relate to, and finally, difficult to understand. So don't go calling yourself ignorant on account of him..

    Marc.
    | Posted on 2010-06-18 01:33:50 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    It'd be more of an analogy than a metaphor, I think.. and more of a story, as opposed to a poem.

    I don't mind that you've your gist of things, in fact, it is rather telling of you as a person. I'm kind of happy to hear that the piece can already accomplish that kind of a task. It means it's definitely on the right path... now I just need to create a molding aspect to it, to have an impact on my readers...

    I was thinking of some heavy, yet succinct religious bombs to drop in the piece... I've already hinted a few political undercurrents. Oh the excitement!

    Thank you for the read.. if it hasn't inspired you, your comment has fueled me a bit more to continue on. I'm enjoying the open-ended character as it is giving me a lot more room to create completely ambiguously related situations..
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