lol
im not as scared of auckland as most other ppl i know
ive even BEEN there hahahaa!
wellington... now thats somewhere im scared of lol.
but actually... im so over govt agencies right now [ACC & WINZ to be exact] that if there is no positive resolution sometime soon i may just come on up to wellington and gatecrash parliament or something...
i was gonna get a cardboard box and sleep in the centre of town here in dunedin but im now thinking sleeping on parliament steps with a sign that says "I GOT DICKED BY ACC" might be more effective
yes... wellington scares me ROFL!
in 10 years youll be down here in dunedin at this rate you realise...?
Thank you for your thoughtful words on my untitled piece. Forgive me for my slow response time, I don't often get the benefit of a well thought out critique, and had largely given up on this site. Yes, that is the baby in question and I badly need to update the picture. I'm a lazy writer (and have yet to revise anything I've posted on this site) but should I get around to tweaking this piece I will keep your suggestions in mind. Thanks again. It's late, but the next time I come on I will give your writing's a peek and return the favor.
Thanks for the comment. It's a story I heard from the only person at the meeting that he knew. I fixed the error. I just felt it was a story that needed to be told. And re: prozac reminded me of it, kind of inspired me to write it.
I wouldn't mind the constant carols in the stores, on the radios, etc, if they would play good versions of them, and not just play the same one over and over and over and over. Good luck anyways! heehee
Yes, I think it would help if you edited that line, it's a bit confusing. I know what you mean about trying to get input. It think the longer the poem, the less people will bother to actually read it, especially when they're just trying to catch up on comments.
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