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    The first half tries to give a sense of the single life (solo, solitaire, a black hole) leading up to that "moment" when I met her. The second half tries for a sense of the feelings at that moment. It was a forever change, and I knew it instantly.

    Thank you for your comments, I too look forward to yours.

    Phil
    | Posted on 2008-12-24 05:43:36 | by phil askew - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you. I have found that my poetry is a lot like my painting and drawing. The pieces I feel are subpar are usually well received while the pieces I really like and am proud of fall flat with everyone else.
    | Posted on 2008-12-23 05:40:29 | by nicodemous - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you. I was hoping for feedback on the ending for I too felt it was too soft, so I've changed it. S3 is a problem. I'm working on. It doesn't have the natural flow of the previous two and the images are not strong enough. I'm trying to say that there are times when we wish tomorrow would hurry and there are time s when we wish it would never come. During difficult times and times of sheer joy. And then I want to say that we can't foresee the future. Ah well, I'll work it through, somehow. Just a thanks once again for taking the time to read my stuff and for commenting THANKS.

    Phil
    | Posted on 2008-12-22 22:31:31 | by phil askew - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you! I liked your phrase "daring expression" so much more than what I had that I've changed it. Thanks a mill..

    Phil
    | Posted on 2008-12-10 18:01:35 | by phil askew - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your kind words. I will be sure to reciprocate your generosity.
    | Posted on 2008-12-08 06:41:57 | by SanctityExposed - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for commenting on my poem, bestseller. forgive me for taking so long to respond. i have been down with a headcold and haven't had much energy lately.

    your comment was very perceptive and i enjoyed reading it very much!
    | Posted on 2008-11-24 03:30:55 | by ruejacobs - [ Reply to This ] -



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