--Elite Writer Alias: TamarRoze Name: Tamar Roze ASL: / female / USA Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 4390 Life Story: joy and pain [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4473 D 12.25 Years 1.23 Decades 149.1 Months 639 Weeks 4.473000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: To drift with every passion till my soul is a stringed lute on which all winds can play. ~Oscar Wilde
The first half tries to give a sense of the single life (solo, solitaire, a black hole) leading up to that "moment" when I met her. The second half tries for a sense of the feelings at that moment. It was a forever change, and I knew it instantly.
Thank you for your comments, I too look forward to yours.
Thank you. I have found that my poetry is a lot like my painting and drawing. The pieces I feel are subpar are usually well received while the pieces I really like and am proud of fall flat with everyone else.
Thank you. I was hoping for feedback on the ending for I too felt it was too soft, so I've changed it. S3 is a problem. I'm working on. It doesn't have the natural flow of the previous two and the images are not strong enough. I'm trying to say that there are times when we wish tomorrow would hurry and there are time s when we wish it would never come. During difficult times and times of sheer joy. And then I want to say that we can't foresee the future. Ah well, I'll work it through, somehow. Just a thanks once again for taking the time to read my stuff and for commenting THANKS.