--Elite Writer Alias: The Gadfly Name: Greg Doyle ASL: 51/M/Moreno Valley, CA Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 3 Life Story: Poem and songs [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: New book coming -------------------------------------------
Mood: Guess what!?
I received the nod from my last publisher to submit my manuscript for my third book. I will have more details down the trail. Please keep the book (and me) in prayer.
Happy Day Greg! Thanks so much for the encouragement and comment! I am enjoying learning and I'm getting to the point where the pain isn't what it was at first - nice callouses! SWEET! Now if I can just stretch those fingers!
Sending lots of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
tif ~*~
Thanks for your comments and suggestions on my piece, Moral Dilemma. They were greatly appreciated. There is no doubt that your revision was better written, however, the redundancy of "I want" and "I need" are there to reflect on the patterns of thought by the character of the piece, it is to suggest that the character thinks a lot about what they want and this is partly the moral dilemma. It is suppose to represent this in structure and by exclamation. I would change it, revise it, but so far the piece still means the same thing to me, and until my perspective changes, it won't be the original concept without it. Truly thanks though.
Thanks for reading my very strange post haha. I'm still unsure of it. I think that was how I was feeling at the time, but it also has its own life as far as writings go.