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I am glad you replied honestly to my post. I am sorry if any part of the poem confused you. It may be that the poem is a representation of my mind, a state which might not correspond to the natural laws of intellect. I since have made a few minor adjustments, (one changed word and three added words. Maybe now the poem feels more complete.
Sorry, I am just getting used to this reply thing....I am supposed to do it here I think.. lol
You're welcome for the comment, it was worth it. Maybe I am the only one who would get it right off the bat? lol...it's just I never seen any other references to females in the story, so I assumed it was her, but it is a very nice tactic indeed... but it is also a scary thing to do to yourself, if you are used to using other humans as your subject. I want to read more :)
The poem I wrote that you commented, I'm glad you liked it, but yeah the angel is kinda pissed off, and the whole looking after her person thing, the point of that was the angel let her make a mistake, also the angel is a bit self centered, thats why the title is "flawed watchers" not "flawed watcher." Glad you enjoyed it.