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ThomasOfTheLost


Name: Thomas not telling
ASL: m/21/Ireland
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Days Away: 5177
Life Story: well how shouldIknow
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15.6 Years 1.56 Quote:
all good things must come to an end


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Mood: The Usual
  
love sucks
love fucks
fuck love
manna from above
poison
rotten love
mmmm baby
stick it swish it lick it
like it love it
love? fuck it
What is it?
havent seen it
heard of it
thats all
maybe once
some dead guy on a hill


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Thank you for your positive comments and suggestions on my poem,any word of advice is always welcome. One or two things though: Firstly, "I swear I heard pebbles", for me it gives a feeling, a need to be believed although it could not be real, thats why "swear" sat confortably there,secondly, as I come from a land where sun reigns, most of my memories with the sun are associated with the sand, thus their mutual existance when it comes to "need". There is always something else, beyond what we read,that perhaps only the person who has written it, is aware of, but then again the critic is the only person who is aware of how the write appears to others, something that escapes the poet.
| Posted on 2007-03-08 08:18:09 | by AutumnLeaves - [ Reply to This ] -
  
youve been here a day...
a completely unsugar coated day...
welcome to this site.
im sure you'll make a few enemies with your sugar free policy but perhaps thats what the site needs.

in all my forevers of being on this site ive never quite had a comment like yours and quite frankly im not sure what to do with it.
but lemme get this one thing straight:
there is NOTHING sexual about my piece 'letters to a lady' at all.
i can vaguely warp the piece to find some hint of an idea but im thinking you may have taken some of the images completely out of whack but thats ok... as for false gods... most girls when theyre little confuse their father for god and worship them...

well i do hope you post something sometime soon coz id love to check your stuff out.
bye for now
| Posted on 2007-03-06 10:27:41 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -



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