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Hi,
Thanks for your very nice comment on my poem PAIN. I recently read your poem CAN YOU FIND ME. It is very depressing poem filled with remorse. Life looks like a void and wind has blown all the gaiety from it. All hopes lie with a true friend who can be a saviour and can fill your world with life. Great poem with lots of anguish.
hey,
thanks for your comment on "Complete" and yeah you pretty much were right. I kinda just found that I wanted to express what I was feeling, but everytime I tried I was over wording it. So I just figured it should be simple. So yeah. Glad you could relate, will look out for your stuff in future :)
Regards, Kalinda
Thank you so much for your comments on "love like a rose" and the favs/ add. Yeah, that's my son Nickolas in the pic. I gotta agree, he is adorballe. Thanks for saying so though. I'll recipricate the wordz very soon, but I g2g right now, take care; peace
I tend to right using rhyming, but not very consistent at all, with some pieces more than others. Rather, I try to achieve an overall flow, and perhaps it was off, and thus later (busy around now, incoming family) I will go revisit it, see if I can re arrange some stuff.
Hey, thanks on the comment on Reminisce. It is just a simple general poem. I didnt really have anything in mind, or else just a jumble of things throughout life. And I tryed to make it simple, short and sweet, kind of. :) Innocence lost could mean anything, from a friendship lost, to a love lost, or even just a habit lost, anything. I kind of tryed to make it general to fit anyone. So thanks again. :)
thank you for the comment on my poem "Orange Man" and the man i am talking about in my poem was 26 when it happened...i was 17 :-/ so i dont think it was the age.
and i will definitely be sure to take a look at some of your poems! :-)
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