TissueName: Chris Berman ASL: 17/Male/New York Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 5210 Life Story: [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 5 Forum Posts: 2 Shoutbox Posts: 4 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 6071 D 16.63 Years 1.66 |
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well Chris, I felt no harm in your comment, it's your thoughts on it, that is what I asked for and that is what you gave me, My friend byacommoncold, just really doesn't like that but it bothered me none so don't feel bad about anything. you didn't do anything wrong.
~liz~ |
| Posted on 2006-09-17 00:00:00 | by Fadingperson - [ Reply to This ] - |
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oh thank you, there was a point to some of the 'poetic burps'. Like sounds of the sun, think about it, we live by the sun, rise with it, fall with it, survive on it. Like when we say things like, " I live to the beat of my heart," it's like that. So...well, thank you so much for commenting, it meant alot to me.
*x* Twisted |
| Posted on 2006-09-16 00:00:00 | by Twisted - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Apreciated the comments, and i agree with you fully on them, though, the poem if you will call it that, is not directed to be serious at all, but a mere muse at deaths cold heart...the aabb rhyming scheme is something ive always favored, and have kinda adapted it in what i guess could be called "my own style of writting" reviewing the rest of my poetry im sure you would see this function in them all, or for the most part all of them, but you comments are apreciated, and after rereading this i do see flaws in the flow that need to be corrected..so thank you :) much apreciated, i always injoy a good critique of my poetry.
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| Posted on 2006-09-15 00:00:00 | by fallenone - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Chris,
Hello, and thank you for your beautiful comment on my piece "Hearth". I, also, appreicate you adding it to your favorites. I rarely see a person with such a fine set of anaylzing skills as I observed in your comment.st sleep for tonight. Please Remind me if I forget. Thank you, again. Yours Truly, Argos |
| Posted on 2006-09-15 00:00:00 | by Aruemos - [ Reply to This ] - |
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| Posted on 2006-09-06 00:00:00 | by Briannan - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Ah. Thank-you, very very much. The truth of the fact is that highschool and extracurriculars can keep a person high on their toes (haha, as I'm positive you know), and poem-writing has been a way to vent lately instead of a thing to enjoy and do solely for itself. I'm glad such vents can still be liked.
I appreciate your remarks, especially the note about the elipses right at the end: after having re-read it, I have to say, the note made a lot fo sense and added a point of indefinate 'finality' to a poem where the line should have been drawn crisply AS WELL as erased crisply. ...Heavens, I just woke up and it's three... Hah, that's what you get. Thank-you: I hope I can return the favor back to you sometime: I'll look around and check in soon. ![]() -Alex |
| Posted on 2006-09-17 00:00:00 | by Imari - [ Reply to This ] - |