Hi there. Well I think you are doing fine though. I’m not much of a story writer yet - haven tried it, but I keep busy with correspondence and writings amongst friends and mostly church people helping out with difficult Scripture passages and such. I am more “occult” related and in metaphysics not meaning witchcraft, that I have studied and also trying to sort out the remnant from Scriptures in the true essence of the Word.
I mostly write in Afrikaans my home language as most of my people aren’t so overly friendly with the English since the Anglo - Boer War in 1889 to 1901. Not many people realise that though. I suggest you take writing lessons since there-in you will benefit mostly from.
Keep it up. Can’t keep a determined one down – believe you me.
Chat again. Regards jm.