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    Mood: The Usual
      
    New boyfriend. New school. New life. I'm in college now so I should be alright...right? Why does this stupid past keep haunting me!

    Time for a little more therapy?


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    Hey Randee,

    Thanks for your comments on Minumum Wage. I'll be sure to fix the typo.
    | Posted on 2009-04-11 11:31:17 | by ssssss - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Happy Passover
    | Posted on 2009-04-09 10:34:45 | by joeyalphabet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    By Biased I mean:

    I at least gave you contsructive points on "Youth",you know what you supposedly come on this site for?

    Well you returned the favour with a dissapointed reply and about four of these crappy little two sentence long comments saying:

    Uh...I guess its good,but you should tone down the imagery,your stuff is too confusing etc etc

    Your writing is pretty much devoid of imagery,and when its there its awfull!

    "tormet, regrets, and damaged swords"

    "I hug it close,
    My blankets tight,
    Try to stop the shaking,
    Try to stop the fight."

    There was no explaination,just you looking to jump on anything you could to put me down on the same level as you.

    If you actually read poetry in general and have a proper grasp of things (and I mean real poets,not whoever your pals are on this site),You would have been able to de-construct my writing proper,if you were well read you could probably tear it apart.

    But your not,I just have to look at your work to make that assumption.

    Its all ham-fisted emotional tripe,look at your feature sure,dont tell me thats not easy to knock...

    So yes,I wont take what you said seriously because you really said nothing rellevent at all,you probably cant counter any of the points in those admittedly vicious comments I dished out either.

    So we should leave it at that.
    | Posted on 2009-03-23 09:14:52 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    If it was a comeback,it would have been awesome!

    But dont worry,I wont be taking your comments seriously,they were far too biased:P

    | Posted on 2009-03-22 11:16:42 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Erm sorry,too much imagery for you?

    Bra fecking vo!

    Ive never read such pessimistic replys in my life.

    You obviously know nothing about poetry full stop,someone like you I mean who likes to spoon feed and be spoon fed by her readers:

    you wont take constructive comments,no matter how desperately you need them.

    Good luck to you in the future,I still say your rubbish,BUT THATS JUST MY OPINION!

    -Craig

    PS:You will never have anything proper to say about my poems you silly sausage.


    | Posted on 2009-03-19 01:27:49 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Lessee…I graduate in May (BA in English), José’s in college P/T – he had to withdraw from school in the fall. He’s at home and driving us NUTS. We adopted a dog. The cats HATE him. Little guy is doing well, the wife’s not (bum ankle). I found a local writing group finally. Went to my 1st meeting last month and enjoyed it a lot. Been writing a little and submitting a lot. I took a shower at home for the 1st time in 15 years. we just got the bathroom redone. No more baths. YAY!
    | Posted on 2009-03-18 14:30:33 | by joeyalphabet - [ Reply to This ] -



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