--Elite Writer Alias: Unicorn Poet Name: Aniqua Raines ASL: 23/F/Salem, OR Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 3901 Life Story: Poet and Lover [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks so much for your comment on my poem "Penny In The Can" I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! And yes, I am definitely keeping 'man' in there, as I think it is that word that makes it really clear how young she is. That's the only reason I put it in there :) And as for your suggestion, I really like that :) I wasn't crazy about that line, and I like it much better with your suggestion - thank you so much!
Wishes and kisses (you know, the chocolate kind!),