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Journal: Tired.... -------------------------------------------Mood: Overwhelmed    Ok I know i said i had a new post that i'm working on, but i'm horribly blocked.... and very busy. So sometime in the future when i get it written i will be posting something new. Man.... graveyard shifts suck.... ...Created 2006-11-10 15:36:36     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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please view and critique my new poem "the man in the field" thanks

| Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by ropedpoet - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi, yep Deadly Recipe was not intended to be humourous. Thanks for your comment. Cheers Azuire

| Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by Azuire - [ Reply to This ] -

hey Thankyou for appreciating my work. Cheers!

| Posted on 2006-10-30 00:00:00 | by moaxcym - [ Reply to This ] -

ur very welcome.. i like your work..keep it up.

| Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by DeathsWife - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks so much for your comment on my poem "Penny In The Can" I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! And yes, I am definitely keeping 'man' in there, as I think it is that word that makes it really clear how young she is. That's the only reason I put it in there :) And as for your suggestion, I really like that :) I wasn't crazy about that line, and I like it much better with your suggestion - thank you so much! Wishes and kisses (you know, the chocolate kind!), ~Mandi Gayle~

| Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by Mandi Gayle - [ Reply to This ] -

*bows to you* Thank you very kindly for those words Good lady, im so amazed by the response that piece was given! I plan to read your work as well, thanks again!

| Posted on 2006-10-23 00:00:00 | by ropedpoet - [ Reply to This ] -

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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