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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Yes, my writing sucks so bad that I have two people that added my first post to their favorites and nobody can find a flaw in the pantoum I posted so they just bashed it or say how the repetition sucks. Well, repetition is part of that form of writing, so live with it. I am not so egotistical to think I have the nerve or the right to change the rules of writing pantoums.

    So according to most of you, I really suck as a writer.
    Boo hoo, I guess I could go cut myself or whine about it but that is not how I do things.

    By the way, I am not Meow Myx so quit asking him/her/it that question.

    As for that burning question "Who are you?" here is the answer.

    I was sent here as a challenge from a fellow writer on a website called writerscafe. They said that commenting was slow on this website and that most people don't understand good writing but they love rants and vent type of writing because they are "trendy" that way here on eliteskills.

    This writer challenged me to open an account here and see if I could get more than six comments on two posts within three days. I have to say that I exceeded that challenge. It is day three of my existence here and I have nineteen comments.

    So with that in mind I will thank you all for making this little experiment a success. You should all be proud of yourselves and I suggest you all go down and buy yourselves a lollipop to celebrate.

    And after my short stint here I have to say that not all your poems suck but 97% of them do. You people need to diversify your writing some more. Get off that one track mind style of writing about one or two topics and open yourselves up some more. I heard this place used to be pretty good once but has lost something. I think the thing it has lost is diverstity but I don't know, I wasn't here to see if it ever really did have diverse writers to begin with.

    Good luck in all that you attempt to do. Don't just stay in school, LEARN in school. And please children, don't become a lazy pot smoking hippy either. Find a good role model.

    Obey all traffic rules as well, but don't be afraid to push the speed limit as long as it is safe to do.

    Goodbye.


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    hahah man i am goignt o cut myslef hahah i like it man ya i no wut u mean eveyone on this website is crying about lost love or sum [censored] need to grow up and find other [censored] to be sad about
    | Posted on 2007-06-12 16:06:19 | by boya - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    And oh yeah. I found you on Writer'sCafe.

    *tsk tsk*


    Meow

    MyX
    | Posted on 2007-06-11 17:24:05 | by MyX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I hope to god no one mistook my writing for yours. In fact I'm certain that isn't the case as I would find that rather insulting. I think your attitude in commenting and the messages you left on people's pages is what caused the mix up.
    There is no mistaking my work from your frilly unimaginative 'poems'.

    Meow.

    MyX
    | Posted on 2007-06-11 17:20:46 | by MyX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey thanks for the comment on How, then, shall we live? its really was a unique compliment... ive never heard something so short breathed and impressive before lol
    | Posted on 2007-06-08 19:27:31 | by itsjustme22 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for comment on 'Bluebell's plaid'. I always say thanks, but with an alias like yours,
    how come you said it was OK? Ah, never mind, I've just been reading the conversation above, and start to get it.

    I don't even know what a pantoum is, so you've given me some study to do already. This makes you a great teacher. I've had many teachers of many subjects, but the only one who made me study real hard was my first wife.

    I checked out Writers cafe and found skill, conceit and commercialism all higher than here. On the other hand, ES doesn't seem to keep the people who go "[censored]", and I like that cos they suck, they're losers who end up talking merely with each other ... a horrible fate!

    Didn't do anything at Writers Cafe because whenever I checked in, I got some sort of spam. Hey, I can get sold whatever I need without wasting my computer time ... I like ES because the only folk who stay here are both generous and driven to self-expression however reckless! What you need to do now is put your time where your ego is and contribute regularly to ES, or else stay away and not be discouraging my young friends who are writing mostly about immediate reality and getting a lot of fun from meeting and talking about it as writers without trying to establish pecking orders.

    There's no authority in the world can tell a poet whether they're any good or not. It's just an inappropriate concept that we are getting pretty pleased to be free from, with the aid of the net. But I agree that Level Three isn't very densely inhabited in the verse game! Maybe it's because more people are being poets. In that case, I like it ...







    | Posted on 2007-06-07 23:24:15 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    not everyone around here sucks, really. i've been here for a few years. and, yes, i've gotten frustrated with some of the things that have changed 'round here in the last little bit of awhile...
    but i would love to direct you to some really good poets here. try Silverdog, nansofast, cuddledumplin, Sandburg, Someone's Epiphany.. actually, they are all poets who've been around here awhile, and i can't imagine that you wouldn't find something that catches your heart and soul.

    pace,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2007-06-07 14:03:02 | by magnicat - [ Reply to This ] -



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