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    Mood: Straightening things out...
      
    Long long time since I've been here. Almost forgot about it. But here I am. And it looks like nothings changed...which is odd.

    Anyhoo take it easy folks, may have a browse and who knows maybe write some stuff at some point seem to have lost the bug these past years but I'm sure I've got some scribbles to work on.


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    Hey! I know it's been a while, but thank you so much for the comments on Lesson Learned. True story, my Dad had such a way putting things. And I don't know how, but he was always right and it always worked to his favor. I'm like you, I know it would back fire! Anyway, thanks again!
    | Posted on 2007-07-13 15:25:53 | by kiddo13 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the feedback. it says "here in your arms" because we are going to be meetng again i a month. i did some sh!t that made it so i had to leave town but he's gonna meet me where i am. thanks for the comment. i like the revisions you made on my piece. i'll think about adding them.




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    | Posted on 2007-06-08 20:25:17 | by ladiesplanet1 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you so much for the comment on Rememberies, i wasnt sure if that one would really get much of a response, and you went and proved me wrong. thank you.
    i read some of your work today and i honestly think you are a wonderful writer.
    I will try to take some of your suggestions.

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-05-23 12:34:03 | by blu_kittin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks so much for the comment on my poem "If Teardrops Were Diamonds" - I really appreciate it, as well as your suggestions. I can't change infinite t 'untold' though, because I use 'untold' in the poem already in the next stanza, and I don't want to have it twice :) But thanks for the suggestion anyhow!

    Cheers and God bless,

    ~Mandi~
    | Posted on 2007-05-22 20:45:41 | by Mandi Gayle - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for your note on "Satisfaction" and taking time to write. It was inspired by someone, but I'll not say. And to take oneself
    less seriously too I think is in order. Thanks again for coming by.

    Nan
    | Posted on 2007-05-22 16:37:19 | by nansofast - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you very much for your comment on "true love comes in a dream"...

    I see exactly what you mean and actually,believe it or not,almost all of the poem used to rhyme,
    but I changed it because someone told me the voice was conflicting with the words(you probably saw the comment below actually),
    so I toned it all down(because I agreed and to be honest it sounded a little too hysterical),
    so yeah,I kind of stripped it of a lot of the originals humor or quirkiness because it should be more of a tormented poem.

    Its not finished yet however,Ill probably add some more back in,in a more reserved and solid form so thank you,your comment will be a big help to me...

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2007-05-21 14:25:24 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -



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