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    hey...
    coem by and say hello next time you sign in. hope everythings going okay in your world. infact..i hope everything is brilliantly swell!
    ciao for now
    remember to smile
    jaydee
    | Posted on 2007-06-19 05:55:21 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    no aplology needed dude.
    i temporarily had a big ego and thought my comments had scared you off. im glad its whole nother reasons that have caused your absence though i am sorry to hear of your computers passing.

    see ya sometime soon.
    hope your easter was nice.
    jayde
    | Posted on 2007-04-13 05:45:00 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    come back!
    | Posted on 2007-04-11 02:10:22 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    oh no!
    i got kicked out of class coz i SUCKED!
    i couldnt find a metaphor to save myself and i... just... sucked....

    having said that i found the "poem" i wrote the day i was politely encouraged to find a new class and it wasnt too bad... the teacher had given us an envelope full of words and told us to put them however we wanted... mine was pretty good for the most part... i especially like the start:

    the invisible gesture slipping into the
    violinists bare arms
    before an impatient crowd,
    fingertips winking like lovers

    hehe... the rest aint so great sadly but yeah... school wasnt really my thing.

    anyways... im really glad you appreciate my comments coz i think i am addicted to commenting on your stuff right now and i dont want you to feel like im bombarding you or think [censored] or anything coz its actually quite the opposite. i think youve got some killer images you just gotta present them in a way that suits them better is all.

    as for swear jars...
    my mother wants to invest in one.
    the day i came off my bike and was at the hospital it seemed the only word i knew was fvck and my mother said she wished she had have implemented the swear jar already coz she would have been rich... i told her to fall off a motorbike and smash into the ground and break stuff and not swear haha. then i turned and glared at the nurse and roared FUUUUCCCCCKKKK!!! at her coz she sat my bed up real hardout and put a cuff and sling on me and it was too much

    im so over being me sometimes.
    but i will return to comment sometime soon.
    im off to see my dad who isnt doing so good and we're gonna watch No Direction Home coz we're both Bob Dylan fans.
    | Posted on 2007-03-28 00:02:30 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    just wanted to pop by and say hi!
    and now i think i will check out a piece or two before i find bed... yes... that sounds like quite the plan.

    stay smiling.
    | Posted on 2007-03-26 06:43:08 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Yea, I find the imperfections is what makes it strangely perfect in a way...
    | Posted on 2007-03-25 22:00:33 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -



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