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I am leaving this site. I feel like I rarely get critique of any usefulness, and it's just time to move on. Best wishes, keep writing.


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If you still look in here ... where did you go when you left? I keep on checking out poetry websites, but there isn't one like this (so far!) or so it seems. If there is a site that suits you better, I'd like to hear about it? The chancy way of getting comments is a problem here; I think we're supposed to plot and plan together and form working groups. But a lot of users have this complaint anyway ....
| Posted on 2009-06-17 22:06:30 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
Thanks for the advice :) I do tend to sort of just throw things together on some poems in a helter skelter way. Usually end up taking lines from those ones and making one that's decent. Take it easy :)
| Posted on 2008-09-26 01:49:52 | by Sirbongatron - [ Reply to This ] -
I never ripped on your instructor. I was simply pointing out that no one has to right to rip apart someone's poetry. They can make suggestions on the format and style and flow, but otherwise, they cannot judge on the emotions on anything for it's the poet's work. It's the poet's words.


| Posted on 2008-09-24 12:41:24 | by augustcranes - [ Reply to This ] -
Thank you for your comment on darkness, candle. I'm sorry it took me a while to repay you. I'm afraid you (and others) have fairly decimated my comment ratio, which was 200000000% only a little while ago! I'm fighting back though...

I'm not sure I can take your advice though. I usually feel as if my style is a little overdone, a little theatrical, and naked is really what I was striving for.

Thanks anyway!
| Posted on 2008-09-22 22:34:44 | by liquid - [ Reply to This ] -
I really like your writing, and I will hope that you check out mine, although I only have one submission displayed for now. I will like to get your thoughts, and hopefully we will be good friends!
| Posted on 2008-09-16 00:06:09 | by augustcranes - [ Reply to This ] -
Take your time xD
| Posted on 2008-09-14 16:31:48 | by Mieko - [ Reply to This ] -

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