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Thanks for stopping by and commenting. On "Tear Asunder" the lines about leaving the world in darkness, so I will never be alone are more metaphoric. So I will not be alone in my darkness kind of thing. Not literally the loss of light, but the darkness within, which tends to grow in chaos. However, it can’t be a very good line/poem if it needs explaining, which I already knew it was kind of subpar. I just wanted to do something simple in the moment and that is what came out. Not my worse effort, but not really a worthy one either…
Thank you for your comment on "At Ease"
I think confused is actually a really good word to describe the piece. It's like a mind 'phase' of someone/me wondering what their friends mean to them... or a mum looking at her kids wondering where they will go in their future. Depends on how you interpret it.
But thank you so very much, I will work on making things more clear. :]