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    Journal: Sonnets?
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    Mood: Sonnets.
      
    Yes definitely, sonnets.


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    'ravaging crow' is not a haiku, nor is it meant to be one. I was not going for any certain number of syllables. It was just something that wrote itself. It is terse and harsh, but somewhat compelling, and I felt like posting it.

    Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on it. :3
    | Posted on 2010-10-24 15:21:21 | by AsiaticFox - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    sonnets are good.

    thanks for the interest/fave.

    i checked you out the other day and meant to come back. will do.
    | Posted on 2010-10-24 13:34:11 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Actually "Willow" is about the need for romance , and finding love , and all the torrid stormy weather this can bring . As for deleting the rhyme I rarely write blank verse . Call me old fashioned but I think poetry should rhyme . I'm glad you had an affinity for windswept waterfall . At least I've got some redeeming grace . I'll read some of your posts and see if a comment comes up .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2010-10-24 13:33:36 | by monad - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Your profile pic I find it so cute in a weird way hehe.Artful and simplistic.Thank you and I highly take your commentary serious.The only reason I use asterisks is because I rather be known for them.But I can also understand why they trip you out based on them not being commonly used really, they way I do.I thought about leaving them out for NS at first just because the thought of someone not liking them and being thrown off.
    I like the way you deliberate and construct your critiques with time more so than compliment there, here, there and over.
    *Bows* Again your thoughts and suggestions are appreciated.
    Have a good one Jane

    RG
    | Posted on 2010-10-24 13:30:32 | by Rex Gold - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey,

    Thanks for the comment on 'cells'- it can only be good to be compared to shakespeare (god if I could write like him wouldn't that be something?!) and that's a lovely line you left me with :)

    Take care

    Aly
    | Posted on 2010-08-08 13:14:46 | by AlyRose - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Jane,

    Thanks for the comment on \"internal composition\" -- where you suggested bringing back the lily imagery was meant to subtly allude to lilies (opening/folding) -- maybe this could be a little more concrete.

    Overall, I do think the piece could be a little more. So tweak, tweak. . .

    Appreciate the feedback and thoughts!

    -Emeya
    | Posted on 2010-07-27 22:52:54 | by Lady of Shalott - [ Reply to This ] -



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