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    Name: Craig O Reilly
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    Journal:
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Jack Kerouac,
    Under a pine tree
    Is trying to make love
    To the empty mountains.
    It’s true he sees knowing
    Like some silly older brother,
    Stems from knowing nothing really:
    “There’s nothing to be afraid of
    and nothing to be glad about.”
    That’s his golden emptiness.

    And chilled on-edge trying to drown
    Out the semblance of emptiness,
    I ring myself in remembrance;

    You see I was shown a map last night,
    And with the primal terror of a child
    I saw bangs falling into bangs,
    And the great ground swell coming back
    And all of this sustained by pulse,
    Pulse which would scoop you up in a wave
    Try as you might,
    To sit alone under a pine tree,

    And It forbade you from saying profound words
    To empty people, or nothing at all
    After all your words can’t be taken back
    There they are striving,
    Only to be a little more child-like.


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    i should probably state that the music would be more on the ballad side and not hillbilly stomping. melancholic. like there is always a whistfulness or a bit of a heart tug thing going on.

    i suppose what i like most is how you word things, the verbiage. maybe it's the irish. or something like that. lord knows i am just a jersey girl who uses the f word or mf word nore than amything.

    anyway, the below is bluesgrassyish. but kinda what i mean.


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v= /l7JlNrkRFKs

    | Posted on 2017-07-21 11:26:32 | by isabella - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey Craig. Msg received. Msg appreciated. Just had 9 days off so going back to work my body feels like it got beat by a stick. Trying to make an early night of it. You're a good guy. Don't let anybody tell you otherwise.
    | Posted on 2017-07-20 20:17:23 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hard to tell, i guess, with my titles but the g in god is not capitalized so it's more like a summation.

    oh god with the oh left off. god! you know how that feels.
    | Posted on 2017-07-18 20:37:25 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    | Posted on 2017-07-18 20:31:42 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I like your idea of expanding 'Sea Witch'
    It'd be a hell of a challenge to find pleasure in drowning. Especially it being the number one worst way to die, in my opinion.

    Thank you and Challenge accepted.
    | Posted on 2017-07-18 19:54:50 | by endlessgame23 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hiya... I gotta say journal writing on this site over the years was my way of not pushing myself, writing-wise. As well, every now and again there would be a nugget I could build on, make it something else, or let it stand as it originally was. This you already know though.


    I may have told you before as well, that someone I knew once said he wrote everything down because he didn't want to forget things he'd done, thought, felt and the like. That made sense to me. So I followed in that mindset. It's getting it down. Even if it doesn't mean anything to anyone else.

    In saying that, your journal is easy going. Relatable. Honest. And it means something. Always good things in my book.

    And the biker bitch..., I didn't mean that as a slight, I truly realized that I was just a woman who loved to ride and there were some things that I refused to settlle for. In saying that, I have met so many incredible and interesting people from all walks of life who have made a difference in mine. I sincerily try to never judge a book by its cover. I tend to get in deep convos to find out where people are coming from, ya know, how they view their world, what makes them tick. I incorporate what I learn from others and mix it into my own blend. I realize too, I don't have to agree with some people's views, but just because I don't agree, I don't have to make them wrong for it....if that makes sense.

    On another note...
    I don't know if you've ever heard Appalachian music or blugerass but your poetry reminds me of how that type of music sounds and makes me feel. There's this underlying something. It's hard to explain.

    Anyway... This is a several jack daniels into the night reply.

    And there ya have it. (insert smile here)

    | Posted on 2017-07-16 00:38:00 | by isabella - [ Reply to This ] -



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