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    Name: Craig O Reilly
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Jack Kerouac,
    Under a pine tree
    Is trying to make love
    To the empty mountains.
    It’s true he sees knowing
    Like some silly older brother,
    Stems from knowing nothing really:
    “There’s nothing to be afraid of
    and nothing to be glad about.”
    That’s his golden emptiness.

    And chilled on-edge trying to drown
    Out the semblance of emptiness,
    I ring myself in remembrance;

    You see I was shown a map last night,
    And with the primal terror of a child
    I saw bangs falling into bangs,
    And the great ground swell coming back
    And all of this sustained by pulse,
    Pulse which would scoop you up in a wave
    Try as you might,
    To sit alone under a pine tree,

    And It forbade you from saying profound words
    To empty people, or nothing at all
    After all your words can’t be taken back
    There they are striving,
    Only to be a little more child-like.


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    | Posted on 2016-06-29 21:47:20 | by Wolfwatching - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Poetry is where I go sometimes to try to express something, for myself and for other people if I can. That's not everyone's goal, and that's fine. But when half the story is in your head, well then, half the story is still in your head. That's all.

    Some good lines, though.
    | Posted on 2016-06-18 20:14:04 | by lukewarm - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You have a lot of thank you, might I add my thank you, you granted me.
    | Posted on 2015-12-23 06:41:52 | by poetotoe - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Poetry going alright, 😊

    Thank you for the comment on night out.
    Citrine is my birthstone, the significance I suppose is singling out the wedding band, some people do not recognize it as one and it makes me appear single. Also significant to the band itself in that the symbol of unity is represented by my birth color.

    Your kind reaction is refreshing. I appreciate you spending time to read and respond.
    | Posted on 2015-12-22 21:27:08 | by lori_tab - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks Craig, you know you're a diligent soul sometimes- reminding me to talk -and about the value of discussion. At certain times i can't tell you how much i have appreciated that.

    I'm Pollens- sometimes i get weighed down by my page or the history of what's on my page - so yeah you did see that poem elsewhere.

    I think maybe it needs just a fine adjustment but i appreciate knowing you and others found something there.
    | Posted on 2015-09-03 12:46:45 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for what you have said about "Downgraded". You have given me a lot to think about. Maybe I should call it "Erika". That was my original title. But I didn't want to limit the idea to one girl/would-be storm. I thought of so many women who are belittled into losing their fierceness, their strength--or allow it to be taken. But perhaps it would seem more personal the other way. As for the line changes. I will have to go back and re-read and contemplate your suggestions as well as Daniel's. I will definitely play with it some more. Thanks again for the read and the thoughtful critique.

    -Jane
    | Posted on 2015-08-31 21:32:25 | by JanePlane - [ Reply to This ] -



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