Aye, that piece "meaning" is very experimental, and perhaps it does fail. The whole thing in one long sentence strung out like a relapsed junkie. Still the statement I made I think is somewhat bold. It's just I needed to find some way to express it in more than just a sentence, so I turned it into a poem. I mean, it's pretty bold to say that religion is not ethical, that my morality is greater than God's, at least I think so. Anyways, I fail, maybe next time I'll succeed. Thanks for commenting.