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    i've found everything i love still exists, even if it's unattainable
    and even when i'm bored with life and long gone, i can still find and revel in things like music and movies, people who are truly amazing, and for that it's near impossible to stop loving life, i feel better than i have before


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    Thank you for your two cents on "Worthless Poem". I don't mind being compared to a negative Dr. Seuss, I think he had his own way of making fun of the world and he definitely had a sarcastic thing about his writing. Repetitive, I know....I know it was repetitive...pretty repetitive....I can be repetitive....
    | Posted on 2007-04-27 14:59:58 | by Jeniffer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment
    I'm aware the earth is on a downward spiral (i'm an environmental studies major) which is why i choose to continue to write about it about the way i do. WE're all [censored]ed as far im concerned, but any little bit i can do to help I will.
    | Posted on 2007-04-24 11:03:07 | by digitalflower - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You cleared it up a little bit.
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 14:11:07 | by black rose13 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey,
    I don't know if I thanked you for your comment on "my addiction part2" So thank you so much for your comments. They help out alot. Hope to talk to you later.

    <3 black rose
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 14:31:14 | by black rose13 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You could probably cut out some of those lines but i think you should keep

    "the trees push through the windows
    they don't leave much room to escape"

    especially because it then ties in with

    "I don't want to be alone when all the faces swarm my windows
    and fog up all the dreams I've been chasing"

    later on, creating a nice symmetry of imagery. Yep. Hope that helps.
    | Posted on 2007-04-11 13:53:24 | by Icarus - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey Ygi! Thanks for your comment on palindrome. I think is what it is that lends it its "bland" feeling is the number of images and metaphor, some seemingly unrelated. There's almost just too much. I'll tweak with it. But thanks again!
    | Posted on 2007-04-10 21:51:15 | by wool raincoat - [ Reply to This ] -



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