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    --Elite Writer
    Alias: Zanitystar
    Name: Still No
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    Thoughts On An April Shower by Silverdog
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    hey i wanted to say that silvertwin is superbly written. how you went from prosetry in the human aspect to dry boxy statements for the computer was amazing. truly top notch. if you can keep up that dynamic you'd have something special. the rhythm carries the piece in a lovely way. good luck getting online critiques on anything that long anywhere. most of us skip over them. but i'm glad i read it. it was enjoyable. if you managed to tell a good story i would read it through. seemingly publishable (minus grammatical/syntaxual errors(only a few))
    | Posted on 2014-07-18 16:22:23 | by cornonthekob - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i thank you for the comment. you got it pretty much nail on the head with your description. Thank you very much for the comment. have a good one.
    | Posted on 2014-06-25 23:51:26 | by cornonthekob - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I have seen your quote dozens of times and it always gives me a moment of clarity. Thanks for that! Probs the best quote around these parts!

    Peace
    | Posted on 2014-06-05 19:05:09 | by clay - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for all your comments :) they were very appreciated and when you said i struggled with "the promise" you were right :) nice eye!
    | Posted on 2014-04-02 00:59:16 | by Teofila - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks Micheal for April Showers,--especially for the Fave
    I too have been struggling with the heinous "Block" Recently I have been making a determined effort to get back on track--it actually depresses me to have all these thoughts, feelings,experiences dammed up inside and not be able to find the words to express them--or the time, or the motivation except at weird hours when normal people are sleeping.
    Thanks for the vote of confidence---It makes me happy that you felt the beauty and awe that I tried to convey.
    S
    | Posted on 2014-04-01 17:02:31 | by Silverdog - [ Reply to This ] -



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