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Start a poetry club and get a teacher to join it.

| Posted on 2007-02-11 19:21:49 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey thanks for the two comments:) In "I Want To Balance On The Top" it's based on a painting in the art show at my school, same with the other, but in the first stanza, she's saying that these islands are ballerinas, gracefully floating on the water, never falling in. And yea I know that isalnds are attached to the bottom of the lake somewhere, but I liked my idea better:) In "Superficial Entrapment" it turned into a poem about me, but at first it was just a poem about a double expossure photo I was looking at where the girl had moved while taking the picture, and it looked like she was trying to break out of herself. Thanks again:) Sam

| Posted on 2007-01-31 15:10:43 | by Falling Rain - [ Reply to This ] -

Yeah, I've been getting that a lot, that it's too short, I just don't know what to add to it though. Is there such thing as a four line Haiku? Anywhoo, thanks for the comment, I'll figure something out... Sam:)

| Posted on 2007-01-27 09:32:08 | by Falling Rain - [ Reply to This ] -

thanks for the comment/compliment...and thanks for reading the entire, immensely long poem lol

| Posted on 2007-01-26 15:27:53 | by only_a_dreamX - [ Reply to This ] -

lol, their pretty cool, just slightly out there:) It's all good. But yeah, check out the newest one I posted. It's for that class and i need as much feedback as possible... Thanks! Sam:)

| Posted on 2007-01-25 17:04:36 | by Falling Rain - [ Reply to This ] -

thank you for reading my stuff, and for the compliments. I understand about your work, yes thats the way it should be, i think you should make something yours, or at least perfect for you. Anyways, i think you should write for yourself formost. And yes, getting hurt happens, but luckily there are usually some people out there that care about you, thanks again for reading :) tennisfuzz

| Posted on 2007-01-25 16:23:11 | by tennisfuzz - [ Reply to This ] -

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