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    Mood: The Usual
      
    I am not a Poet.

    I merely write down things, words to be more precise, sounding good. The inner meaning doesn't matter. Usually the words do reflect my life to some point at that moment, but that's all. There is no hidden meaning what so ever. There is nothing to interpret and there simply is no story.

    I am the Peter, and this is merely Nonsense.


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    hey, my distant dreamer...
    how have you been faring?
    still beautiful as ever, and your poetry has not faltered in it's brilliance...
    sadly, i can't comment on anything until enough people comment on my work that my rating goes down...
    boo...
    get back to me-
    i miss chatting with you.
    ~Syn
    | Posted on 2008-03-06 23:31:03 | by Syn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Taateli
    Many thanks for your comments on my poem.
    Indeed you are correct on your thinking, i was writing about how people are judged by society and either listened to or forgotten beacuse they are deemed to be a drunk, a bore, a bully or thug or some other description.Instead of doing something original; and finding out who they really are.
    My hope is one day we will be seen for just that, who we are not as what we are judged to be.
    Best Wishes
    Colin Douglas
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by Colin Douglas - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I understand the "some night" part now, maybe it would be better if you wrote it like "for a night" or "only tonight"? I think it's more understandable that way.

    Ah, the shades of blue! "Blind boys never lie, behind the shades of blue". Though I've always thought they are refering to shades as sunglasses here. Hmm. I think they are, lol.

    :)
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by olut ja leipa - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    yeah im a yr 12, but exams dont start for another 11 weeks. the teachers havent really got us doing anything constructive. most of us havent even finishe mid year assignments and since we are a "disadvantaged" school we get the leaniency to do it.
    i say screw that!!! when we get into the real world, our employer isnt going to give a rats where we came from. they want to know we can do the work on time.
    the only bonus being a disadvantaged student is, is that uni gives you extra consideration, and you get into more theatre performances cheaper.
    pretty limited huh?
    i saw the best thing today. n emo picking on another emo for being emo. confused? so am i :)
    good luck on your exams.

    evelyn
    | Posted on 2006-08-07 00:00:00 | by eowyn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    oh, and i like whay you say about the "emo" crowd. they drive me insane. they are taking over the school. its funny how intellegent you feel after exams. whay year are you doing. im in yr 12. did you know that cs lewis and tolkien were best friends, which is why i found a lot of similarities in it, but because of tolkien's life experience, he really detailed things, so they wouldnt get misread. people still misread them.
    i havent actuay read lewis. is it good. and they always ruin the movie. same with LOTR and Harry potter.
    | Posted on 2006-08-05 00:00:00 | by eowyn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for your comment on writers block. its how i get over things like that,if i personify them. its justa tool i use. other people write things that they dont normally do. i might try that one day.
    | Posted on 2006-08-05 00:00:00 | by eowyn - [ Reply to This ] -



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