--Elite Writer Alias: alexanderharm Name: Alex Harm ASL: 17/M Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 4360 Life Story: Love. [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 0 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 4968 D 13.61 Years 1.36 Decades 165.6 Months 709.71 Weeks 4.968000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: Few times in life will you be rendered speechless, so when it happens shut your mouth and let the world around you speak.
Thanks for the comment on Feedbag. I'm currently on the fence about loquacious myself, it was just the right word for me, but point taken. I have quite a lot of insecurities around enjambment, so maybe I need to rethink the breaks as well...
Thanks for the comment on "The Sun and the Cat"!!! I added an intro/ending to attempt to help the point come across more clearly, so if you could check the new version out and tell me what you think it would be awesome.
I've read some of your work and its pretty cool. You're really good at coming up with catchy titles!