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     a moment of nature
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     aware
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     bury
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     because of you
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     you know nothing
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     disquieting dusk
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     waiting in vain
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     cursed cure
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     400403511311
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     the ghost
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     todays tomorrow
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     falling into passion
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     lucid guilt
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     every morning
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     life or something like it
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     after the fact
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     into me
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     running in place
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     this girl (part 2)
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     looking in from out
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    Thanks for them comment, and I'll think about rewriting it. I know the end it a little disturbing and weird, but that's how I intended it to be.
    ummm....I don't understand what you mean about it not rhyming. I did that A B C B rhyming scheme, so it does rhyme. Just wondering what I did wrong.

    but anyways, thanks again

    ~Piper
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