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aliciaflower04


Name: Alicia Alexandria
ASL: 20/F/Ohio
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Days Away: 4467
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Signup Date: 6582 D
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"when it gets dark enough you can see the stars."


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 a moment of nature
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 aware
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 bury
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 because of you
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::Love : Class : Poetry :
 you know nothing
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 disquieting dusk
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 waiting in vain
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 cursed cure
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 400403511311
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 the ghost
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 todays tomorrow
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 falling into passion
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 lucid guilt
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 every morning
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :
 life or something like it
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 after the fact
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 into me
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 running in place
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 this girl (part 2)
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 looking in from out
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Thanks for them comment, and I'll think about rewriting it. I know the end it a little disturbing and weird, but that's how I intended it to be.
ummm....I don't understand what you mean about it not rhyming. I did that A B C B rhyming scheme, so it does rhyme. Just wondering what I did wrong.

but anyways, thanks again

~Piper
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