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Thanks for them comment, and I'll think about rewriting it. I know the end it a little disturbing and weird, but that's how I intended it to be. ummm....I don't understand what you mean about it not rhyming. I did that A B C B rhyming scheme, so it does rhyme. Just wondering what I did wrong.