--Elite Writer Alias: augustcranes Name: adrieline provana ASL: 16 - Female - Underwood Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 0 Life Story: pianoist [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: first light -------------------------------------------
Mood: In Love
I'm reading to take on the world. I can't do it alone, and I'm lucky to have people who love me to hold my hand while I open my eyes to the first light of day. I will live as if every day is my last, and smile as if everyday is my first.
Thanks for the corrections, and not to be rude, but I really don't care much about it. I don't like editing my work...I'm sort of a bum about it.LOL! I only write to get my point across and hope other's can relate and take somethin from it. But again thanks for the comment and contructive critizism.
Beautiful yet Corrupted
Dominique
Thank you for the comment. You understood it well which is a compliment to me, I was able to portray what I needed to for a general audience to comprehend. Thanks.
Don't get the wrong impression of my instructor. She was a wonderful woman, and although she tore my poem to pieces, she made it clear that her students weren't obligated to use her suggestions if we could provide a good reason why. Thanks for the comment, though. :)
Thanks for the comment, Adrieline. Your name is pretty awesome too! Sorry if I spelled it wrong. Anyway, I'm really glad you liked it, and thanks a lot for stalking me
Sorry I am taking long to comment on your work. I don't like to critique stuff when I am sleepy cos that never turns out helpful. Again, thanks a lot!