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    No, no, I appreciate what you have to say entirely. I always request that people bash it because I post my poems here so I can recieve criticism and try to make the poems better. I can understand about how rhyming is very constrictive. I think that I started rhyming because someone once described my free verse as "verbal spit up", which, in essence, it was. I shall think of my use of pie. Thank you.<3 ^-^
    | Posted on 2010-07-02 13:58:29 | by lechuga - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment, positives, negatives, all good crit. I appreciate it. db
    | Posted on 2010-07-02 06:13:33 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, this isn't the world, it is La La Land, I don't think you need your fight here, relax, be loved.
    | Posted on 2009-11-10 22:54:41 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on Fufilling and I honestly have to agree with everything you said. Lmao it's just there's always that one poem that you write you and you know it could be great yet your to stubbourn to change it or go back to it. So of course it just stays the same, lmao well that ones mine.

    Once again Thanks

    -Torcher
    | Posted on 2009-10-18 14:35:47 | by BlueTorcher - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    The jerk you burned nearly went home for good. We ought to not make this place dangerous to work in? If we want to be writers and get read, we are going to be criticized by plenty of jerks and we line up for that quite voluntarily.

    Nobody here can hurt you unless you come hurt already.

    Sorry to be pompous but I hate seeing my friends quarrel! Poets are special and this isn't the street, it is our own country ...

    Your comment boxes are closed because you didn't check in for a while; that's why I haven't commented on your work yet.
    | Posted on 2009-06-15 20:04:38 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Nah, it's not worth or fit for a reply!
    | Posted on 2009-05-27 07:56:45 | by edcherry - [ Reply to This ] -



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