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     Landscape
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Every Inch A Man.
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     A Simple Aside to Wallace Stevens,
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     TO MY NARCISSISTIC NEIGHBOR
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    ::Them : Class : Poetry :
     mainlining
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Victory in the Sage Place
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     Say what?
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    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     Adjusting The Lens
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Ghazal-In Memory of My Cat
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    ::Death : Class : Poetry :
     Ghazal 1
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     A Walk Between Classes
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    ::Nature : Class : Poetry :
     GASP! Cigarettes! More!
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    ::Comedy : Class : Poetry :
     The Cat Woke Me Up!
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    ::Death : Class : Poetry :
     The Only Good One Is a Dead One
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    ::Comedy : Class : Poetry :
     (untitled)
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    ::Love : Class : Haiku :
     The House Built in 1913
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    ::Nostalgia : Class : Prose :
     WINTER NEVER FAILS.
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     a good day for a walk or suicide
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    ::Depressed : Class : Prose :
     THE WORM METHOD
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    ::Death : Class : Poetry :
     REMEMBERING WAR IN CHANGING REALMS
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    Hey,

    i wanted to thank you for taking the time commenting on "The suburb down the hill".
    I'm glad you enjoyed it and yes, there has been a lot of negative writes these days...Even i think like that at times, but i'm trying to change that...go outside the box and think of others instead of me.
    Thanks again for your time....I really appreciate it.
    Take care...
    ~Irina
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by charmedidentity - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello, thanks for the comment...

    actually, your comment was exactly the type I was looking for most of all-- the fact that this resonates with you on a very personal level. I think I just saw a scene in my head: most likely that was me on the floor regarding my sense of... estrangement, detachment, overall lethargy for this world at the time of writing. I'm not sure-- it was all very symbolic to me, and still is...

    We write to understand ourselves, don't we? I think we do... and if someone comes along to share this, then all the better.

    I would comment on your ghazal but it's only two lines long... I'm not too sure what I could say that would be of any help really. If you look up "ghazal" on www.wikipedia.com or whatever that site's name is, I'm sure you'll find a wealth of information...

    Thanks for your time appreciated...
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks so much for the comments of Complete Randomness... i am glad someone took the time to actually read it and say something... its an epic, i know... and that is what i thing turns a lot of people off... they like to read 5-7 lines write a short comment and then post another [censored]ty poem of thier own...

    oh well... at least a someone enjoyed it.... thanks again

    PEACE and LOVE, gregory
    | Posted on 2006-08-06 00:00:00 | by geherald - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey there, thanks for the comment on Shannon and for complimenting my work overall. Good to know someone appreciates it.
    | Posted on 2006-08-06 00:00:00 | by Jeniffer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    OMG Jereme, I'm so sorry! The comments won't get deleted because it's been more than a day. I'm awefully sorry, although I am quite sure that the error is from the site, because never before in my life have I posted the exact same comment four times, nor do I have any intention on doing so.

    Perhaps if you deleted it, and then copied the content into another post it would be best. If you do so, let me know so that I may leave a new comment there. I do apologise for the mes I've caused you, this is the first time something like this has happened.

    DeepDreamer2008
    | Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by DeepDreamer2008 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for commenting. There are several things in that that I'm still not quite sure about, and you hit on quite a few...

    for example, the lowercase king- i stumbled on that, whether it should be king or queen or something else entirely- the Nazarenes a reference to Jesus of course- i didn't think of another cigarette image.

    also, the "things that remind" were also a stumbling point... "smokestacks" has no point except to bring forth thr cigarettes again...perhaps overly done. i quit a few months ago and i really want one, maybe it came forth subconciously, lol.

    anyway, i had deluded myself into think it was finished, as poetry is almost never finished... you reminded me of the numerous things i have yet to consider. thanks for saying it has potential, and again for commenting in the first place. i'll be sure to stop by...

    | Posted on 2006-07-29 00:00:00 | by lukewarm - [ Reply to This ] -



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