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    Thanks for ALL your comments! I'm paying attention to your remarks; they are attentive and seem to show me a weak point every time! I like that.
    | Posted on 2008-02-11 21:10:21 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for comment on 'Exile'!

    You said it should have some more word in it. I reckon you might be right. It's like that because I tried to do something like the original verseform. Translations from Chinese literature are into a phonetic script from an ideographic one; so as well as a distant echo of the poet, I was trying to unify several wildly different interpretations by translators! It was so fun.
    | Posted on 2008-02-11 21:04:38 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for comment on the Cold Mountain poem!

    I'm so fond of it that I fooled with it for years ... best way to do better would be to make a new one from scratch, I guess! But I moved on.

    See that the Post Office lost your writings .. that is a disaster which I can hardly imagine, and I am so sorry to hear about it.
    | Posted on 2008-02-11 20:54:44 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey...you left me this note:

    Hi, Kimmy. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I did revise it, including with a new name and would appreciate it if you could give it a quick look-see.
    Thanks!

    So...whad'ja name it...? Would love to read it...
    ~K~
    | Posted on 2008-02-11 13:48:28 | by KimmyMim - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comment on 'Star Gazing'. If the concept made you uncomfortable, then I've succeeded in my goal
    I did wonder about writing a bit of the message, but I think it ultimately would have been detrimental. Especially since I really don't know what the message is.
    Anyway, thanks again!
    | Posted on 2008-02-10 21:38:43 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    It's always down to you in the end, all I can give are suggestions. Tanks for bearing with me, you are too kind.

    DeepDreamer2008
    | Posted on 2008-02-10 17:14:59 | by DeepDreamer2008 - [ Reply to This ] -



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