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    Hey! y did you delete your other works?

    the one you have on is soo good...but i cant comment on it
    | Posted on 2009-01-30 05:25:18 | by TheStillSilence - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey mate, thanks for your comments on Allowance, much appreciated. You're the only one that's reviewed it, for some reason. With the rhyme, I had the last line of each verse repeat, so everything had to rhyme with "dole". Maybe I shouldn't have had a repeating last line. Anyway, cheers!
    | Posted on 2008-11-07 13:21:56 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment on 'runaway soul". thats exactly what it meant!!! I'm glad you got that.

    and that line sorta meant: changes to reveal your self (transparency) come so easily and fluently (like dancing), but the person avoids them at any cost (hence runs away).

    i guess it was a bit confusing; most of my images are, since they only make sense when i think of them lol
    | Posted on 2008-10-02 19:05:49 | by TheStillSilence - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i prolly horrible misread it, and if i did sorry!!!

    and i see you have another work up!!! yay *happines*

    yea i should be doing comp hw...this is why i get no sleep =p (i was suppose to start it like 6 hours ago...)
    | Posted on 2008-10-02 03:10:20 | by TheStillSilence - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    dude thank you so much. i didnt think anyone would comment. that helped a lot!
    | Posted on 2008-10-01 20:33:24 | by joshgood518 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    chan! i love you!! and ur comment of "amazing" lol
    it was ANYTHING but =p

    | Posted on 2008-09-29 18:53:24 | by TheStillSilence - [ Reply to This ] -



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