Thanks so much for the comment on "mary's", my take was always it was a date-relationship thing, from the time I could understand what cooking for 12 disciples entailed... anyway... thank you :) I am coming back later to comment (*no, I really am, I am just having to hit-and-run today)... just wanted to say a quick thanks and let you know, your kindness is not overlooked :)
The meaning behind your poem is what you see but it can mean so many things to others. I think that when we write something of our selves and put it out there for all to read we give something of ourself to all who read. Each person may take something different from the poem and other may see what you feel. The beauty of poetry is that it gives us just a small window to see inside the writers mind and heart. Poetry should always be appreciated for the magic of the words and what it does to the very soul of the writer and the reader.
I am sure that you have a meaning for your write and you can tell me if you wish but I tell you that your poem touched me in a certain way because of the way the words were written.
Thanks for your kind comment on "Goodnight, Long Ocean." I'm glad you found beauty and spirituality in it. You know, maybe enlarging it would be a good idea. I could take the beauty and the idea and take it further. I'll work on that.
its about spiritual beliefs, and loved ones being taken away, for the decision the person made. and being lost, entering satans world, and hurting everyone in the process....and of course about love. well thank you for commenting it is greatly appreciated.