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    Glad you grabbed the humor in that one. All is not lost.
    | Posted on 2007-05-16 10:57:55 | by ErgoIgo - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi, and thanks for the comment on 'heart on the line'. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for the occasional rhyme, I have the worst time leaving it out of my writing. But I'm working on it. I didn't realize there was so much in there till after I posted. LOL.
    Thanks again.
    | Posted on 2007-05-16 05:42:28 | by Wild Flower - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you so much for your comments on my silly little poem. As for the grammer, I've always tried to be a student of that art. Thanks for noticing.
    | Posted on 2007-05-15 21:01:53 | by psychotherapist - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thankx for lookin back over it.
    im glad you approve.
    i agreed the ending is alil. rough around the edges, but it just feels wrong to change it.
    it seems as though it'd be incomplete without it being raw. i mean, that was how i felt and that was how i wrote it then.
    so that's not changing but thanks.

    i send you hugs,
    ~grace~
    | Posted on 2007-02-20 23:08:42 | by XmaryjaneX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey, took your advice on "sometimes"
    i tried to soften it up a bit.
    but not all of it.
    well, anyway i'd appreciate it if you would read it now and tell me what you think.
    xoxo
    ~grace~
    | Posted on 2007-02-12 15:18:36 | by XmaryjaneX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks so much for the comment on my piece.
    | Posted on 2007-02-08 15:09:26 | by all4u - [ Reply to This ] -



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