--Elite Writer Alias: beldolore Name: Domenica Nicole ASL: an ageless wanderer Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 36 Life Story: Complicated... [ Ignore User ]
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Hi, and thanks for the comment on 'heart on the line'. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for the occasional rhyme, I have the worst time leaving it out of my writing. But I'm working on it. I didn't realize there was so much in there till after I posted. LOL.
Thanks again.
thankx for lookin back over it.
im glad you approve.
i agreed the ending is alil. rough around the edges, but it just feels wrong to change it.
it seems as though it'd be incomplete without it being raw. i mean, that was how i felt and that was how i wrote it then.
so that's not changing but thanks.
hey, took your advice on "sometimes"
i tried to soften it up a bit.
but not all of it.
well, anyway i'd appreciate it if you would read it now and tell me what you think.
xoxo
~grace~
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