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    Journal: Anew
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Starting over again, with new perspectives. I just finished a crappy draft of a huge paper--which will end up being my final draft. It's too bad, really. But it's how i did things, how they all turned out.
    In terms of my creative writing, which has been rather stunted of late, I have acquired some new perspectives, as above mentioned. I've always appreciated given forms, though i could never fit into them well. hey, i still can't, but i understand more of their purpose, now, and certainly hope that i can use their form to convey what i mean to say. got some new ideas--for me, at least. As i put them down, i'll see where they take me. cuz that's the point, i think.


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    Thank you for your comment on 'haiku'. I appreciate your thoughts.
    As far as comparing the seasons to machines, I've always thought of time's movements as more machinations than miracles of nature. Perhaps I need a change of perspective, eh?
    Thanks again for the comment!
    | Posted on 2009-09-30 12:46:29 | by latentlylyrical - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    For my poem, "The Zoo", I think you came the closest to what I was getting to. But it wasn't just stupidity, it was everything, it was immoralization, it was intolerance, and it was killing the sweet innocence of those who still had it. Thank you for understanding.
    Be well,
    ~Azura*
    PS: I do have a vivid imagination, but I don't see it, I just think of things, but I can use words that can show things too. Power.
    | Posted on 2007-07-12 12:35:09 | by EmpathicAya - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I don't think I responded to your long message, and have no time just now but apologize for being useless and will be on it in a couple of days. I think your explanation will show me some stuff I don't seem to understand! Just takes me a long time to study anything, except soup recipes, I'm pretty good at them.
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 22:27:17 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your encouragement Ben, I really appreciate your thoughts.

    I read your journal, I have an idea for you, as in a way to use your free-time on something that isn't "passing".

    Psalms 119:9-11
    Joshua 1:8
    Jeremiah 15:16

    Check those out.

    God's word is life. When we are in his word, its like hanging out with God and seeing who he is and what he is like, and in the mean-time we are filling our souls with light and casting out the darkness that so desperately tries to dwell there. Use your time to study the word of God and grow closer to him. That is an investment that will never spoil, and it also hits a few other of your "aspirations" at the same time. A main on being "Relationship".


    Until every ear has heard
    Every heart has felt
    And ever soul has been liberated,

    -Tom
    | Posted on 2007-05-17 07:38:19 | by UnspokenDreamer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    That's nice of you to send me an explanation of 'Hibernating'. I'm not very sophisticated about the reader's deciphering process, I know, But I need to get better at that, because each poet is developing a personal language ... of course, anybody who's interested should be capable of learning it! I'll be back ... just run out of time.

    I hope your newish phase of life (that you indicate in the description) presents some challenges and that they are all exactly one millimetre within you ability to beat them.
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 21:57:50 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for all the comments, it is really nice to have someone ready my work and take the time to write something. Thanks a lot.
    | Posted on 2007-01-07 00:00:00 | by djtswing - [ Reply to This ] -



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