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    Mood: The Usual
      
    je suis desole
    my heart in a hole
    regret writ upon my face
    my heart you stole
    je suis desole
    i will never forget this place


    ...Created 2009-04-06 02:49:01     [ View Past Journals ]

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    oh yeah...and i got the finger joke finally. haw..haw...




    MyX
    | Posted on 2009-03-06 22:35:38 | by MyX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    that is a lousy poem. what is it doing on your journal? it sounds like something i would have written on angel dust at 16.


    MyX
    | Posted on 2009-03-06 22:33:05 | by MyX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I agree funeral procession has been used before,Im well aqquainted with the phrase,but I calling it cliché is a little harsh,especially if you think it works in the overall context.

    Its not exactly "broken heart" or "crimson blood".Just because youve heard something before doesnt mean its cliché.

    But anyway,theres another thing:

    the second stanza was about the Irish government,as in "boffins",it had little to do with classes as such,mainly referring to whats happening in my country at the moment where it looks as though well be ousting our current leaders.

    So its not un-realistic,they are afraid.

    I must agree however on punctuation,its something I need to incorperate better,so thank you for the tip.

    -Craig

    PS: Glad you thought the piece was mostly okay:-)

    | Posted on 2009-02-26 01:48:20 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I can't tell if you are making fun of me, but thanks!!! I'm glad I at least achieved admittance in that room.




    MyX
    | Posted on 2009-02-25 14:54:36 | by MyX - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    HOORAY FOR PA!!!
    | Posted on 2009-02-25 06:45:27 | by cornonthekob - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    what does your alias mean?
    just curious.
    | Posted on 2009-02-25 00:19:57 | by meoww - [ Reply to This ] -



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